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Band 5+: The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurland, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.

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The image depicts a line graph representing average daily maximum temperatures throughout the year for four cities: Auckland, Christchurch, London, and Edinburgh. Auckland's temperatures show a range from 23°C in January, declining gradually to around 14°C in July, and rise to 21°C by December. Christchurch's temperatures range from approximately 22°C in January, decreasing to 11°C in July, and increasing back to around 17°C by December. London's temperatures start at roughly 7°C in January, rising to a peak of about 23°C in July, and decline to about 9°C by December. Edinburgh's temperatures start at around 5°C in January, peak at around 17°C in July, and fall back to approximately 6°C by December.

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The line graph shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom. Let’s take a look at the main features and compare the temperature.

According to a graph, the hottest temperature is always taking place in New Zealand’s territory. Auckland’s and Christchurch’s degrees are almost the same. The lowest numbers in these places werw from July to September. In Christchurch the coldest weather was 11 degrees. Unlike Christchurch, Auckland has a little bit warmer weather. From July to September the numbers were holding on 15.

It was different story with London and Edinburgh. Their numbers are the same too but you can see that London has warmer temperature from March to November. Edinburgh has 4 degrees of difference. Their the lowest numbers are definitely the same. They hold in January and December and they are a bit higher than 5 degrees.

Overall, the ghaph shows that there is always warm in New Zealand. United Kingdom has the usual temperature for all the seasons.

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numbers: 4

christchurch: 3

london: 3

edinburgh: 3

temperature: 3

degrees: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making some comparisons between the cities. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions that affect the overall clarity and completeness. For example, the temperature ranges for Auckland and Christchurch are not accurately reported (e.g., Auckland's range is stated as 15 degrees in July, but the actual is around 14°C; Christchurch's range is not fully described). Additionally, the report omits specific data for London and Edinburgh, such as their peak temperatures and the exact months of their highest and lowest values. The language is sometimes informal and contains grammatical errors (e.g., 'werw', 'ghaph', 'It was different story'), which detract from the professionalism of the report. To improve, ensure all key features are accurately reported, use more precise data, and maintain a formal academic tone throughout.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and an overall summary, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, phrases like 'According to a graph' and 'It was different story with' could be more precise. The paragraphing is adequate, but the cohesion between sentences could be improved by using a wider range of linking devices and ensuring that each paragraph has a clear central idea. To improve, focus on creating smoother transitions between sentences and paragraphs, and ensure that pronouns and references are clear.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some repetition (e.g., 'numbers', 'warm', 'same'). There are attempts at comparison, but the language is often informal and imprecise (e.g., 'a little bit warmer', 'usual temperature'). To achieve a higher score, use a wider variety of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'peak', 'decline', 'fluctuate') and comparisons (e.g., 'whereas', 'in contrast'). Also, avoid informal expressions and aim for a more academic tone.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Examples include 'the hottest temperature is always taking place' (incorrect tense and structure), 'werw' (spelling error), 'It was different story' (missing article), and 'Their the lowest numbers' (incorrect possessive and article). The range of sentence structures is limited, with many simple sentences. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for spelling and article errors. Pay attention to tense consistency and use of comparative forms.

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