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Band 7+: The line graph shows the number of people using five kinds of public facilities in a town in France at different times during the year 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph showing monthly data on facility usage in 2022 for Library (Jan: 5000, Feb: 5200, Mar: 5500, Apr: 6000, May: 6800, Jun: 7000, Jul: 7500, Aug: 6200, Sep: 5800, Oct: 5400, Nov: 5000, Dec: 4000), Museum (Jan: 3200, Feb: 3600, Mar: 4000, Apr: 4500, May: 5000, Jun: 5200, Jul: 5400, Aug: 4800, Sep: 4200, Oct: 3600, Nov: 3400, Dec: 3000), Park (Jan: 2000, Feb: 3000, Mar: 4000, Apr: 6000, May: 8000, Jun: 9000, Jul: 9500, Aug: 9000, Sep: 8500, Oct: 7000, Nov: 5000, Dec: 3000), Public Pool (Jan: 1000, Feb: 1500, Mar: 2000, Apr: 2500, May: 4000, Jun: 5000, Jul: 6000, Aug: 5500, Sep: 4800, Oct: 3000, Nov: 1500, Dec: 1000), Youth Centre (Jan: 1500, Feb: 1600, Mar: 1700, Apr: 1800, May: 2000, Jun: 2500, Jul: 3000, Aug: 2800, Sep: 2600, Oct: 2400, Nov: 2200, Dec: 2000).

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The line graph presents information about the number of people using five types of public facilities: a library, a museum, a park, a public pool, and a youth centre in a town in France at different months during the year 2022.

Overall, the graph data clearly show that the park was unpredictable throughout the given period and reached the peak share. In contrast, the library remained constant all months, while the youth centre started by remaining stable and then soared dramatically.

At the beginning, the youth centre remained approximately unchanged until June at 3,000 people, then it skyrocketed gradually to 7,500 people in August. However, the youth centre plunged considerably to nearly 3,000 people, in 4,500 people compared to October. By contrast, it could be noticed that the library almost stood still in figure, being the most static facility during the period.

The park and public pool experienced identical fluctuations. However, there was a significant difference between the two figures, approximately 4,500 people. Additionally, the museum began with a quite rise to about 3,900 people in March, then declined to just over 1,100 people in the next month. After being somewhat stable for two months, the museum increased gradually to 4,000 people in June.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 9

youth: 4

centre: 4

public: 3

library: 3

museum: 3

months: 3

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Task Response

The response addresses the task by describing the trends of the five facilities, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions that affect clarity. For example, the library is described as 'constant' and 'static', whereas the data show a clear rise and fall. The youth centre is said to 'skyrocket' to 7,500 in August, but the actual peak is 3,000 in July. The museum's trend is also misreported. Additionally, the park and public pool are said to have 'identical fluctuations', but their patterns differ in magnitude and timing. To improve, ensure that the key features and comparisons are accurately reported, and avoid contradictory or unclear statements. Organise the response more logically, perhaps grouping facilities with similar trends, and use precise language to describe changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and separate paragraphs for different facilities. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear references and awkward transitions. For example, the phrase 'in 4,500 people compared to October' is confusing and breaks the logical progression. Additionally, the second paragraph mixes information about the youth centre and library without a clear link, and the third paragraph jumps between park, pool, and museum without smooth connections. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a coherent set of comparisons, with logical linking words to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to trends, such as 'soared', 'plunged', 'skyrocketed', and 'fluctuations', which is appropriate for the task. However, some word choices are imprecise or awkward, e.g., 'unpredictable' to describe the park's trend, 'stood still in figure', and 'a quite rise'. There is also repetition of 'remained' and 'stable'. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'declined steadily', and ensure that adjectives and adverbs are used accurately. Avoid informal or vague expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and some varied tenses. However, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'the youth centre plunged considerably to nearly 3,000 people, in 4,500 people compared to October' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Also, 'the museum began with a quite rise' should be 'a quite sharp rise' or 'rose quite sharply'. There are minor issues with articles and prepositions. To improve, focus on sentence construction, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for clarity. Using a mix of simple and complex sentences correctly will enhance accuracy.

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