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Band 4+: The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurland, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.

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The image depicts a line graph representing average daily maximum temperatures throughout the year for four cities: Auckland, Christchurch, London, and Edinburgh. Auckland's temperatures show a range from 23°C in January, declining gradually to around 14°C in July, and rise to 21°C by December. Christchurch's temperatures range from approximately 22°C in January, decreasing to 11°C in July, and increasing back to around 17°C by December. London's temperatures start at roughly 7°C in January, rising to a peak of about 23°C in July, and decline to about 9°C by December. Edinburgh's temperatures start at around 5°C in January, peak at around 17°C in July, and fall back to approximately 6°C by December.

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The line graph provides information about the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.

Overall, there are four cities compare their Auckland and Christchurch, London and Edinburgh, where shows the average daily maximum temperatures during years. The Auckland and Christchurch started high and finish high temperatures. Moreover, London and Edinburgh located in the United Kingdom opposite.

Firstly, there are decrease temperatures indicator in January and December in the two towns London and Edinburgh. Accordingly, high degrees show in the middle of the year this happened approximately around July.

Secondly, the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand in January and December. Respectively, there are decrease degrees approximately between June and August. Difference between two cities Auckland and Christchurch around five temperatures in July.

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temperatures: 6

auckland: 5

christchurch: 5

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london: 4

edinburgh: 4

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maximum: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by mentioning all four cities and identifying some general trends, such as the seasonal variations. However, the response is significantly hindered by grammatical issues and unclear phrasing that make much of the information difficult to follow. The overview is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity, and the data presentation in the body paragraphs is fragmented. To improve, focus on using standard sentence structures to describe trends (e.g., 'Temperatures in London rose to a peak in July') and ensure that comparisons between the cities are clearly articulated using comparative language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical in its attempt to group cities, but the progression of ideas is difficult to follow. There is a lack of effective cohesive devices, and many sentences do not connect logically to the previous ones. To improve, focus on using transition words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly', 'Conversely') to link observations between the Northern and Southern Hemisphere cities. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite limited and often repetitive or used incorrectly (e.g., 'decrease temperatures indicator', 'difference between two cities... around five temperatures'). There is a struggle to use precise academic language to describe trends. Aim to learn specific verbs for trends (e.g., 'fluctuate', 'plummet', 'peak', 'climb') and nouns for data (e.g., 'a significant drop', 'a slight increase') to improve the sophistication of your report. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impede communication. There are issues with sentence structure (fragmented sentences), subject-verb agreement, and word order (e.g., 'there are four cities compare their...'). Many sentences are incomplete or lack a clear predicate. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures (Subject + Verb + Object) and practicing the use of complex sentences using subordinating conjunctions like 'while' or 'whereas' to compare data points.

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