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Band 5+: The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph titled "Dubai Gold Sales 2002" with months on the x-axis and number of dirhams on the y-axis ranging from 0 to 400 in increments of 50. Data points are as follows: January at 200, February at 150, March at 350, April at 300, May at 125, June slightly above 100, July at 125, August at 175, September at 125, October at 150, November at 200, December slightly above 200.

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The given line graph illustrates the changes in Gold sales rate in Dubai throughout year 2002.

Overall,it shows how sales values have fluctuated throughout the months in the given year showing promising sales rates at the starting few months however ,ending with less sales rates compared to the start.

At the startinng of year 2002 in January the sales rate is at 200 increasing slowly in Feb and abruptly increasing in month Mach.However,until June the sales rates have decreased rapidly.It increased in August but then the sales rate fell sharply in sept ,reaching the lowest value in the given year along with the month July at value 160.

Since then, the sales value have increased steadly specially from October to December with value being near to 200.Although the first quarter of the year shows great sales rate values ,the year ended with less sales campared to the stat of the year.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sales: 10

value: 4

given: 3

rates: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and provides an overview of the fluctuations throughout the year. However, there are several inaccuracies in data reporting that affect the clarity of the response. For instance, the report claims sales increased in February, whereas the data shows a decrease, and it misidentifies the lowest point of the year. Additionally, there are some mechanical errors in spelling (e.g., 'startinng', 'Mach', 'steadly', 'campared') and punctuation. To improve, ensure that the direction of trends (increase vs. decrease) is accurately matched to the data and focus on precision when citing specific values.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the cohesion is weakened by poor punctuation and spacing (e.g., 'Overall,it', 'however ,ending'). The use of cohesive devices is somewhat repetitive, and the flow is interrupted by grammatical lapses. To improve, ensure there is a space after every comma and period, and use a wider variety of linking words to connect ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is functional but limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'startinng', 'Mach', 'sept', 'steadly', 'campared', 'stat'). There is also some repetitive use of 'sales rate'. To reach a higher band, aim for more precise academic vocabulary and ensure that all words are spelled correctly. For example, instead of 'great sales rate values', you could use 'significant peaks' or 'substantial sales figures'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'sales value have increased'), tense consistency, and sentence structure. Punctuation is also a significant issue, particularly the placement of commas. I recommend practicing complex sentence structures and focusing on the correct use of articles and prepositions to improve accuracy.

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