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Band 6+: The line graph below shows the number of international tourists who visited three different countries - Japan, Australia, and Canada - between 1995 and 2020.

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The image contains a line graph titled 'Number of international tourists who visited Japan, Australia and Canada (1995-2020)' with a vertical axis scaled from 0 to 30 and a horizontal axis marking the years 1995, 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2015. Japan's data points for these years are 4.8, 8.5, 14, 20, and 28 respectively. Australia's corresponding data points are 4, 7, 10.5, 14.5, and 18.5. Canada's data points are 2.5, 4.5, 8, 10, and 12 for the same years.

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The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited various countries which are Japan,Australia,and Canada from 1995 to 2020. Units are measured in numbers.

Overall, the number of tourists increased significantly in all years over the 25 years. It is also clear that Japan was the most popular destination among tourists, whereas Canada is the least visited one.

In 1995, Japan had the most number of tourists with 5 million people while Canada is the least with under 5 million people. The percentage of people who visited Australia were always between Japan and Canada. Over the following years, tourist numbers rose steadily in all destinations. By 2020, Japan saw a remarkable increase to 30 million visitors, while Australia and Canada reached around 20 million and 15 million respectively.

It is evident from the graph that the number of tourists visiting Japan increased more rapidly than those visiting Australia and Canada.

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6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

canada: 6

tourists: 5

japan: 5

million: 5

visited: 3

number: 3

years: 3

people: 3

australia: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and provides relevant data from the graph. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and a lack of specific data points in the body paragraphs. To improve, include more precise figures and focus on comparing the rates of increase more explicitly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and supporting details. The progression of ideas is logical. However, the introduction could be more precise by directly mentioning that the graph shows the *number* of tourists, not the *proportion*. Also, avoid repetition by combining the last two sentences into one.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and appropriate for the task. There is room to enhance the range by using more varied synonyms and descriptive words to illustrate the trends and comparisons. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'increased,' consider using words like 'grew,' 'expanded,' or 'surged.' Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with generally accurate sentence structures. However, there are a few instances where sentence construction could be improved for clarity and conciseness. For example, in the first paragraph, consider rephrasing 'Units are measured in numbers' to be more integrated into the preceding sentence or removed entirely as it's somewhat redundant.

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