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Band 7+: The line graph below shows the number of international tourists who visited three different countries - Japan, Australia, and Canada - between 1995 and 2020.

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The image contains a line graph titled 'Number of international tourists who visited Japan, Australia and Canada (1995-2020)' with a vertical axis scaled from 0 to 30 and a horizontal axis marking the years 1995, 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2015. Japan's data points for these years are 4.8, 8.5, 14, 20, and 28 respectively. Australia's corresponding data points are 4, 7, 10.5, 14.5, and 18.5. Canada's data points are 2.5, 4.5, 8, 10, and 12 for the same years.

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The given line graph demonstrates the amount of foreign visitors who traveled three separate countries-Japan, Australia, and Canada- between 1995 and 2020. Overall, the numbers of tourists gradually raised throughout 25 years. Japan experienced the most dramatic growth, while Australia and Canada showed more gradual climb.

In 1995, Japan’s international tourists’ number reached approximately 5 million, compared to about 4 million in Australia and neary 2.5 million in Canada. All three countries witnessed steady growth over the following 5 years. Japan’s figure rose sharply after 2000, reaching roughly 28 million by 2015, making it most visited country at the end of the period. Similarly, Australia climbed steadily to proximately 19 millions in 2015.

By contrast, Canada showed upward trend more slowly, from just about 5 million in 2000 to around 12 million in 2015.

Overall, all three countries became more visited by tourists, the gap between the most and the least toured nations widened substantially.

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The report covers the main trends and provides relevant data from the graph. However, it could benefit from including data from 2020 to provide a more complete picture and improve accuracy. Also, the writing could be more precise and avoid approximations like 'approximately' and 'nearly' by using the actual figures from the graph.

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The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for describing trends and comparisons. However, there are instances where more precise or sophisticated language could be used. For example, instead of 'gradually raised,' consider using 'increased steadily' or 'exhibited a gradual upward trend.' To further enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating synonyms and varied phrasing to avoid repetition.

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The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures. However, there are some grammatical errors and phrasing issues that need attention. For example, 'numbers of tourists gradually raised' should be 'number of tourists gradually rose,' and 'nearly 2.5 million' should be 'almost 2.5 million'. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate preposition usage. Proofreading carefully can help catch these errors.

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