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The image contains a line graph titled 'Number of Overseas Tourists (in millions), 1990-2020', plotting visitor numbers for France, Spain, and Japan. For France, the tourist numbers in millions for the years 1990, 1995, 2000, 2005, 2010, 2015, and 2020 were approximately 45, 50, 55, 60, 70, 76, and 82, respectively. For Spain, the corresponding numbers were 30, 35, 40, 50, 60, 68, and 73 million. For Japan, the numbers were 40, 42, 43, 41, 38, 36, and 34 million for the same years.

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The line graph compares the number of overseas tourists(in million) in France, Spain, and Japan between 1990 and 2020.

Overall, it is tangible that both France and Spain had increasing numbers by the end of this period except for Japan. However, while Spain and France saw a mostly steady increase, Japan showed fluctuant patterns before finally declining.

In 1990 the figures started around 45 million for France, 40 million for Spain and 30 million for Japan. They went through minor but noticeable changes over the next few years. Following this, the numbers increased rapidly until 2000. France reached approximatley 50 million, while Spain and Japan climbed to 45 million and 40 million.

After 2000, the numbers adjusted significantly. The rate for France and Spain rose steadily, ending at about 80 and 75 million in 2020. In contrast, Japan’s numbers grown considerably to 40. It then continued to decrase graduelly for the rest of the period, finishing at approximately 35 million by the year 2020

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france: 6

spain: 6

japan: 5

numbers: 4

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and compares the three countries appropriately. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., starting values for Spain and Japan are swapped, and the description of Japan's trend is slightly off). The language is generally clear, but there are minor errors in word choice and grammar (e.g., 'tangible', 'fluctuant', 'decrase graduelly'). To improve, ensure data accuracy and proofread for spelling and grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall trend and paragraphing. However, some sentences could be more logically connected, and the flow between data points could be smoother. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas, such as 'in contrast' or 'similarly', and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a clear aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks sophistication. There are some errors in word choice (e.g., 'tangible' instead of 'evident', 'fluctuant' instead of 'fluctuating') and phrasing (e.g., 'numbers grown' instead of 'numbers grew'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'experienced a steady increase' or 'witnessed a decline', and avoid informal or incorrect terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward constructions, such as 'tourists(in million)' (missing space), 'approximatley' (spelling), 'grown' (should be 'grew'), 'decrase graduelly' (spelling). There is also inconsistent use of past tense. To improve, proofread carefully, use a wider range of sentence structures, and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms.

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