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Band 8+: The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London between 2003 and 2012.

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The image is a line graph depicting the number of serious crimes (armed robbery, assault, murder) in London from 2003 to 2012; armed robbery decreases from just under 1,500 in 2003 to under 500 in 2007, then fluctuates between 500-1,000 until 2012; assault remains consistent around 500 in 2003, peaks at 750 in 2005, declines to below 500 in 2006, peaks again at 750 in 2007-2008, and finally drops to below 500 in 2012; murder increases from 150 in 2003 to 200 in 2005, drops to below 100 in 2006, then fluctuates between 150-200 until 2012.

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The line graph compares the number of armed robberies, assaults and murders recorded in London between 2003 and 2012.

Overall, armed robbery declined dramatically over the period, whereas the number of assaults increased overall despite some fluctuations. Murder remained by far the least common crime and changed relatively little.

Armed robbery stood at approximately 3,300 cases in 2003 before peaking at around 3,600 in 2004. The figure then fell sharply, reaching a low of about 1,000 in 2008. It subsequently recovered to roughly 1,400 in 2009 and remained relatively stable until 2012.

By contrast, assaults started at around 2,200 cases and fluctuated during the first half of the period. After falling to approximately 1,900 in 2006, the figure generally increased, reaching a peak of about 2,700 in 2012. Murder figures were considerably lower, rising from roughly 500 in 2003 to around 800 in 2005 before falling again. Thereafter, they fluctuated within a relatively narrow range and ended at approximately 500 in 2012.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends for each crime type, but it contains significant inaccuracies in the data. For example, the figures for armed robbery and assault are much higher than those in the visual description, and the trends described do not match the actual data. The report also omits some key features, such as the fluctuations in assault and the specific peaks and troughs. To improve, ensure that the data is accurately reported and that all main features are covered, including comparisons between the crime types.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is exceptionally well-organized and easy to follow. The introduction clearly paraphrases the task, and the overview effectively summarizes the main trends. The body paragraphs are logically divided by crime type, with clear topic sentences and smooth transitions. Cohesive devices are used naturally and do not draw attention. Paragraphing is skillfully managed, and the progression of ideas is seamless.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is precise, varied, and appropriate for the task. The writer uses a wide range of lexical items (e.g., 'dramatically', 'fluctuated', 'recovered', 'relatively stable', 'by contrast') with full flexibility and control. The language is natural and sophisticated, demonstrating a strong command of lexical features. There is no repetition or awkward phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used accurately and appropriately. Sentences are varied in length and complexity, with correct use of tenses, prepositions, and punctuation. There are no noticeable grammar errors, and the overall control is excellent. The writing is fluent and error-free, meeting the highest standards of grammatical accuracy.

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