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Band 8+: The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London between 2003 and 2012.

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The image is a line graph depicting the number of serious crimes (armed robbery, assault, murder) in London from 2003 to 2012; armed robbery decreases from just under 1,500 in 2003 to under 500 in 2007, then fluctuates between 500-1,000 until 2012; assault remains consistent around 500 in 2003, peaks at 750 in 2005, declines to below 500 in 2006, peaks again at 750 in 2007-2008, and finally drops to below 500 in 2012; murder increases from 150 in 2003 to 200 in 2005, drops to below 100 in 2006, then fluctuates between 150-200 until 2012.

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The graph illustrates the amount of major crimes that were committed in London from 2003 to 2012.

Overall, the number of armed robberies decreased significantly over time, while that of assaults increased. It can also be seen that over the period, the figure for murders remained relatively unchanged.

The figures for armed robberies were the highest in the first half of the period, peaking at around 3700 cases in 2004. However, this dropped dramatically to just over 1000 in 2008 before rising slightly to around 1500 in 2009 and staying at that level until 2012. Cases of assaults fluctuated between just under 2500 and 2000 between 2003 and 2008, and this value rose steadily to approximately 2800 in 2012.

The figures for murders were the lowest among the three categories over the period, starting the period at just over 500, and it reached a peak of approximately 1000 in 2005 and fell gradually to about 2003 levels in 2008. After that, it remained relatively stable until 2012.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall trend, but it contains significant inaccuracies in the data presented. The figures for armed robbery, assault, and murder do not match the visual description, and some trends are incorrectly described (e.g., stating assaults increased overall when they actually fluctuated and ended lower). To improve, ensure that the data and trends are accurately reported, and avoid inventing specific numbers that are not supported by the graph. Focus on describing the main features clearly and accurately, and make sure the overview reflects the correct overall patterns.

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The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices is generally effective, and the progression of ideas is logical. To achieve a perfect score, ensure that the overview is fully accurate and that paragraphing is even more skillfully managed, with a clearer separation of trends for each crime type.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied, with good use of synonyms and precise terms such as 'illustrates', 'decreased significantly', 'fluctuated', and 'remained relatively stable'. The report demonstrates a strong lexical range. To reach a band 9, consider using even more sophisticated and natural collocations, and ensure that all data descriptions are precisely worded to avoid any ambiguity.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used with full flexibility and control. Sentences are varied and complex, and punctuation is used correctly throughout. There are no noticeable grammar errors, and the overall accuracy is excellent. This aspect of the writing is fully deserving of the highest band.

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