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Band 5+: The line graph below shows the percentage of people using mobile and fixed-line phones in Africa between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a line graph showing telephone subscribers per 100 inhabitants in Africa from 1995-2004. Fixed line starts at 1.8 in 1995, slightly increases to 2.5 by 2004. Mobile starts at 0.01 in 1995, rises slowly to approximately 0.5 by 1999, then accelerates, reaching around 3 in 2002 and peaking at 9 in 2004.

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The line graph represented below depicts the information about the percentage of fixed line and mobile users in africa over a period of 11 years.

Overall, at a first glance, both the user of land line and mobile are increasing at it’s initial years.

Firstly, the land line users are 1.7% in the year 1994 are higher as compared to mobile users in the same year, then after few years in 1997 the percentage of users had crossed over 2%. While, from the year 2000-2001, both the users are about same for a Pasticular period. Although, it was at it’s Peak in 2004 there are about 3.1% users.

Moreover, In the year 1994 there are about 0.06% mobile users, which are initially low but after few years it showed an rose in it’s users. However, after your 2000 the number of users are more and had even crossed fixed line users it is an record breaking moment at that time and later on it starts increasing year on year and it was at its Peak in the year 2004, there are about 8.8% users of mobile.

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users: 10

about: 5

mobile: 5

after: 3

there: 3

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The report addresses the task and identifies some key trends in the graph. However, the analysis lacks depth and precision. The language is simple and contains some inaccuracies. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points and comparisons, and ensure accuracy in reporting the values from the graph. Also, vary your sentence structure and use more precise language to describe the trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of information could be improved. The introduction is adequate, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions between ideas. The 'overall' statement is vague and doesn't provide a strong summary. Use more precise language to connect ideas and guide the reader through the data. Paragraphing needs improvement to separate distinct trends or time periods.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is a lack of precision in describing the data, and the word choice is not always appropriate ('record breaking moment'). Expand your vocabulary to include more specific terms for describing trends (e.g., 'increased sharply,' 'remained stable,' 'fluctuated'). Avoid informal expressions. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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