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Band 6+: The line graph below shows the percentage of people using the internet in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a line graph with a vertical axis measured in percentages from 0% to 100% in 25% increments and a horizontal axis denoting years 2000, 2005, 2010, 2015, and 2020, displaying three categories: Country A, Country B, and Country C. Numerical values for Country A are: 35% in 2000, 50% in 2005, 65% in 2010, 80% in 2015, and 95% in 2020. Numerical values for Country B are: 20% in 2000, 30% in 2005, 45% in 2010, 60% in 2015, and 80% in 2020. Numerical values for Country C are: 5% in 2000, 15% in 2005, 35% in 2010, 55% in 2015, and 75% in 2020.

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The line graph illustrates the percentages of households who have accessibility to the Internet in the three countries from 2000 to 2020.

Overall, the figures for each countries increased markedly across the period. The highest figure was recorded by Country B at the beginning of the period. Although, there were sharp rises in the percentages for Country A and Country C which had surpassed the figure of Country B by the end of the period.

At the beginning of the period, the percentages of Country A, Country B and Country C were 20%, 40% and 10% respectively. The accessibility of Internet in Country B increased to 65% in 2010. The percentage of people accessing Internet in Country A rose to 60%, while the Country C recorded the lowest percentage among them in 2010.

After 2010, there was a slight change in the percentage of accessing the Internet in Country B which had risen to 75% from 70% by 2020. The proportion of households having accessibility to the Internet in Country A increased sharply to 80%, reaching its peak in 2010. The figure for Country C rose dramatically from 45% in 2010 to 85% in 2020, although it had the lowest percentage at the beginning of the period.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

country: 13

internet: 5

period: 4

percentage: 4

percentages: 3

accessibility: 3

increased: 3

figure: 3

beginning: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but it contains several inaccuracies in the data and some inconsistencies. For instance, the initial values for Country A, B, and C are incorrectly stated as 20%, 40%, and 10% instead of 35%, 20%, and 5%. Additionally, the figures for 2010 and later years are not accurately reported (e.g., Country A is said to reach 80% in 2010, but the correct value is 65%). The report also mentions a 'slight change' for Country B from 70% to 75%, which is not supported by the data. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately transcribed from the graph and that the trends described align with the actual values. Focus on presenting the key features clearly and accurately, and avoid introducing unsupported details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The progression of time is followed effectively. However, some cohesive devices are overused or misused (e.g., 'Although' at the start of a sentence, 'which had surpassed' could be more concise). The paragraphing is adequate but could be improved by more distinct separation of trends for each country.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate for the task, with good use of terms like 'markedly', 'sharp rises', 'surpassed', and 'dramatically'. However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'accessibility to the Internet' and 'accessing the Internet') and a few awkward phrases (e.g., 'the Country C'). A wider range of synonyms and more precise collocations would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'each countries' should be 'each country', 'which had surpassed' is awkward, and the sentence 'After 2010, there was a slight change...' is confusing. Punctuation is mostly correct, but the misuse of 'Although' and the incorrect data references (e.g., '20%, 40% and 10%' instead of the correct values) indicate a need for more careful proofreading and grammatical control.

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