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Band 6+: The line graph below shows the percentage of people who used public transport in a city between 2015 and 2020.

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The image features a line graph titled "Percentage of people using public transport". The vertical axis represents percentages from 0% to 60% in increments of 15% (0%, 15%, 30%, 45%, 60%), while the horizontal axis displays the years 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, and 2020. Data points for the years are: 2015 at 30%, 2016 at approximately 35%, 2017 at 45%, 2018 at approximately 40%, 2019 at approximately 50%, and 2020 at approximately 55%.

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The line graph illustrates the proportion of individuals who travel using public transport in a specific city between 2015 and 2020.

Overall, the number of people using public transport was the highest in 2020. While the lowest point was in 2015 , the general trend was upward until a slight decline in 2018. It continued to increase rapidly till 2020.

The percentage in 2015 was 30%. In 2016 it grew a bit reaching about 35% and in 2017 it reached 45%. The graph declined a bit in 2018 having the percentage of about 40%. In the last years , 2019 and 2020 it increased to 50% and 55%.

In conclusion it the line graph shows that the use of public transport has grew over these 5 years even though it had a brief decrease in 2018.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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public: 3

transport: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing a clear overview and accurate data description. It correctly identifies the overall upward trend, the peak in 2020, and the dip in 2018. The data points are accurately reported, and the structure is logical, with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. Minor lapses include a few grammatical errors (e.g., 'it the line graph', 'has grew') and slight awkward phrasing, but these do not detract from the overall clarity and task achievement. To improve, ensure grammatical accuracy and vary sentence structures for a more polished response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The progression of ideas is easy to follow. However, the conclusion is somewhat redundant and could be integrated into the overview to avoid repetition. Additionally, the use of cohesive devices is adequate but could be more varied to enhance flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with terms like 'illustrates', 'proportion', 'general trend', and 'slight decline'. There is a good range of synonyms for describing changes. However, some phrases are informal or imprecise, such as 'grew a bit' and 'increased rapidly till 2020'. Using more precise and formal language would improve the lexical resource score. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors that affect accuracy. For example, 'has grew' should be 'has grown', and there are punctuation issues such as spaces before commas. Additionally, some sentences are overly simple and could be combined to show greater grammatical flexibility. Improving these aspects would enhance the overall grammatical range and accuracy.

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