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Band 5+: The chart shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by reporting and selecting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a line graph with three categories from 2003 to 2012: Burglary at 3,400 (2003), 3,500 (2004), 3,000 (2005), 1,700 (2006), 1,500 (2007-2008), 1,000 (2009-2010), 1,100 (2011), 1,400 (2012); Car Theft at 2,300 (2003), 2,000 (2004), 2,200 (2005-2006), 2,000 (2007), 2,100 (2008-2009), 2,200 (2010-2011), 2,400 (2012); Robbery at 600 (2003), 700 (2004), 900 (2005), 1,200 (2006), 1,100 (2007-2008), 1,000 (2009-2011), 700 (2012).

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The line chart illustrates information about how many serious crimes namely, Armed Robbery, Assault and Marder happened in London from 2003 to 2012.

Overall, it is clear that the number of Armed Robbeies dropped thoughout the given period. Whereas, the amount of Assault showed fluctuated and Marder maintained relatively stable until end of the year.

In 2003, the number of Armed Robbeies was approximately 3400 the highest crime in London. Additionally, it rose slightly nearly to 3700 in 2004. After that, this figure declined dramatically to around 1000 in 2008. While it grew in 2009 and remain stable for the next three years.

By contrast, the amount of Assault had approximately 2300 in the beginning of the year. However, the figure of Assault fluctuated between 2004 and 2008. Subsequently, it increased just above 2500 in 2012 the large crime in London. On the other hand, marder started at roughly 500 in 2003. On the other hand, this trend remaind stable until2007 and 2010. Finally it was the lowest crime in London.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

assault: 4

london: 4

armed: 3

marder: 3

stable: 3

crime: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but the data for each crime is often incorrect or vague (e.g., 'Armed Robbeies' rising to 3700, 'Assault' increasing to 2500, and 'Marder' starting at 500). The report also misidentifies the crimes (Armed Robbery, Assault, Murder vs. Burglary, Car Theft, Robbery) and omits key details such as specific years and values. The structure is somewhat clear, but the language errors and lack of precise data detract from the task achievement. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, use correct crime names, and provide a clearer overview with specific figures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the use of 'On the other hand' is repeated and misapplied, and the phrase 'until2007 and 2010' is confusing. The paragraphing is not consistently managed, and some ideas are presented in a disjointed manner. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single trend or category, and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') accurately and sparingly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'declined dramatically', 'fluctuated', 'maintained relatively stable'), but there are several lexical errors and limited range. For instance, 'Armed Robbeies' is a misspelling, 'Marder' should be 'Murder', and 'the amount of Assault' is an incorrect collocation (should be 'the number of assaults'). The phrase 'the large crime in London' is awkward and unclear. To improve, expand your range of synonyms for describing trends (e.g., 'plummeted', 'surged', 'remained steady'), and ensure correct spelling and word choice. Use precise nouns like 'figures' or 'numbers' instead of 'amount' for countable items. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('this trend remaind stable'), incorrect verb forms ('showed fluctuated'), missing articles ('the beginning of the year' should be 'the beginning of the period'), and punctuation issues (missing spaces, run-on sentences). The range of grammatical structures is limited, with frequent reliance on simple sentences. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., subordinate clauses, passive voice) and review basic grammar rules for tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Proofread carefully to eliminate errors.

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