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Band 4+: The chart shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by reporting and selecting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a line graph with three categories from 2003 to 2012: Burglary at 3,400 (2003), 3,500 (2004), 3,000 (2005), 1,700 (2006), 1,500 (2007-2008), 1,000 (2009-2010), 1,100 (2011), 1,400 (2012); Car Theft at 2,300 (2003), 2,000 (2004), 2,200 (2005-2006), 2,000 (2007), 2,100 (2008-2009), 2,200 (2010-2011), 2,400 (2012); Robbery at 600 (2003), 700 (2004), 900 (2005), 1,200 (2006), 1,100 (2007-2008), 1,000 (2009-2011), 700 (2012).

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The chart shows three different types of crimes in manchester city from 2003 to 2012.

Overall, Burglary seems to be the highest crime commited in 2004, while robbery is the least crime commited in 2008, and car theft being in the middle average of both of them.

A closer look at the chart burglary has the highest crime commited on 2004 up to 3,700 approximately with the least on 2008 of 1,100 and later have reduced over time, but car theft seem to go opposite and increased by the upcoming year with peak on 2012 of 2,800 approximately, and robbery being the least of peak 900 in 2005 and gradually decreased over the coming years.

Although different crime has different rate but burglary seem to have a huge fall over the time, robbery having a slight decrease and car theft sadly having boost. But overtime the crime rate can have a boost or reduce in future.

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robbery: 3

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theft: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of specific detail. The overview is present but could be more comprehensive. The body paragraphs identify some trends, but the data is not always accurate, and the analysis is basic. To improve, focus on providing more precise data and developing a more insightful analysis of the trends. Also, ensure that the grammar and vocabulary are accurate and varied.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the main points and comparisons. Consider organizing the report into distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect or trend in the data. Use cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the trends and data accurately. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends (e.g., increase, decrease, fluctuate, peak, plateau) and use more specific terms to refer to the crime types and time periods. Avoid using the same words and phrases repeatedly.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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