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Band 4+: The line graph below shows the percentage of people who used the internet in three countries between 2000 and 2020. • Country A: 10% (2000), 30% (2005), 55% (2010), 75% (2015), 90% (2020) • Country B: 5% (2000), 20% (2005), 45% (2010), 60% (2015), 70% (2020) • Country C: 15% (2000), 35% (2005), 50% (2010), 55% (2015), 60% (2020)

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Image for topic: The line graph below shows the percentage of people who used the internet in three countries between 2000 and 2020. • Country A: 10% (2000), 30% (2005), 55% (2010), 75% (2015), 90% (2020) • Country B: 5% (2000), 20% (2005), 45% (2010), 60% (2015), 70% (2020) • Country C: 15% (2000), 35% (2005), 50% (2010), 55% (2015), 60% (2020)

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The image displays a line graph titled "Percentage of People Using the Internet (2000-2020)", with a vertical axis labeled "Percentage (%)" from 0 to 100, and a horizontal axis for "Year" from 2000.0 to 2020.0. The graph plots data for Country A, Country B, and Country C. Country A's data is approximately: 2000 (5%), 2002.5 (10%), 2005 (15%), 2007.5 (20%), 2010 (26%), 2012.5 (31%), 2015 (36%), 2017.5 (41%), 2020 (45%). Country B's data is approximately: 2000 (10%), 2002.5 (15%), 2005 (25%), 2007.5 (37%), 2010 (49%), 2012.5 (60%), 2015 (74%), 2017.5 (86%), 2020 (98%). Country C's data is approximately: 2000 (2%), 2002.5 (2%), 2005 (3%), 2007.5 (6%), 2010 (9%), 2012.5 (11%), 2015 (13%), 2017.5 (17%), 2020 (22%).

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The line graph demonstrates the proportions of individuals who used the internet in three different countries in 2000 and 2020.

It is clear that the highest percentage of population used internet in country A, whereas, the propotion of people used internet in country C was lowest in the given years.

In 2000, prople was use internet appoximately 10% in country A. Same year country B and C population used at 5% and 2% respectively. From 2005 to 2010, internet use increased from 30% to 55% which enhanced 25% over the 5 years. At the same years, Country B and C internet users was 20% and 40%, 10% and 25%.

For the remaining years, Between 2015 and 2020, internet used at 70% and 85% in country A. On the other hand, In 2015, country B and C population spend internet at 65% and 45% respectively. Both countries internet users rasied 80% and 65% in 2020. An increased 20% and 15% over the 5 years.

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internet: 9

country: 7

years: 4

population: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the line graph, but it contains several inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The overview incorrectly identifies Country A as having the highest percentage, while the data shows Country B had the highest. The description of trends is confused and contains errors, such as mislabeling countries and misstating percentages. The report would benefit from a clearer structure, accurate data extraction, and a more logical presentation of trends over the entire period. Focus on correctly identifying the main features and comparing the countries accurately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to describe the data but lacks a clear overall structure. The information is presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, making it difficult to follow the trends over time. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, organize the report into clear paragraphs: one for an overview of the main trends, and then separate paragraphs for each country or time period. Use a range of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'over the period') to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'propotion', 'appoximately', 'rasied') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'spend internet'). To improve, learn and use a wider range of vocabulary related to describing trends (e.g., 'rose steadily', 'experienced a sharp increase', 'remained relatively stable'). Ensure correct spelling and word forms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly hinder understanding. These include incorrect verb tenses ('was use', 'used at'), subject-verb agreement errors ('prople was', 'users was'), and incorrect word forms ('enhanced', 'spend'). Punctuation is also faulty. To improve, focus on basic sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of past tense for describing historical data. Practice writing simple, accurate sentences before attempting more complex structures.

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