Line Graph

Band 5+: The line graph gives information about the number of deep mines producing coal in the UK between 1913 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The line graph gives information about the number of deep mines producing coal in the UK between 1913 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image depicts a line graph displaying the number of deep coal mines in the UK from 1913 to 2015 across marked years 1913, 1923, 1943, 1983, 2003, 2015; starting at 3024 mines in 1913, decreasing to 2607 in 1923, 1690 in 1943, 943 in 1983, further dropping to 170 in 1983, 20 in 2003, and finally reaching 5 mines by 2015, illustrating a continuous decline over the specified period.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

An illustration of number of deep mines that produced coal in the UK between 1913 and 2015.

Overall,the trend in production consistently noosedived from the beginning of the year of production upto the level where the final coal produced was at level in the last twelve years.

The year 2003 to 2015 recorded null number f coal mines while the beginning of 1913 registered 3000 number of coal mines with the highest quantity of coal produced at 3024. Nonetheless, a sharp decline was noted from 1913 all the wat to 1983.

On the other hand, a bigger decline in coal produced from 1923 to 1943 registred the sharpest decline from 2607 worth pof quantity to 1690 in 1943. Despite the declined trend 2015 produced the lowest coal quatified at 5. This continous reduction flattened by the end of the final year in 2015. This thefore means,the number of mines kept on declining from 3000 in 1913 to 0 in 2015.

Word Count: 160

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

produced: 5

number: 4

mines: 4

decline: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the overall decline in the number of deep coal mines, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. Key data points are misreported (e.g., stating 0 mines in 2003-2015 instead of 20 in 2003 and 5 in 2015), and some years are incorrectly referenced (e.g., 1983 is mentioned twice with different values). The report also lacks a clear structure and fails to make effective comparisons between time periods. To improve, focus on accurately presenting the main trends, include specific data for each marked year, and organize the information logically with clear overview and supporting details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear phrasing and abrupt transitions. The overview is somewhat vague and does not clearly highlight the main trend. Paragraphing is present but not consistently effective, and some sentences are difficult to follow. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices more precisely to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The report attempts to use a range of vocabulary, but there are several inaccuracies and awkward choices (e.g., 'noosedived', 'wat', 'quatified', 'thefore'). Some terms are used incorrectly, such as 'null number' and 'bigger decline' which are not precise. To improve, focus on using accurate and natural vocabulary, and avoid invented or misspelled words. A wider range of precise terms related to trends and data would enhance the report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles, incorrect verb forms, and run-on sentences. The errors are frequent enough to distract the reader. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures with greater accuracy, and proofread to correct basic grammar and punctuation mistakes.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The line graph gives information about the number of deep mines producing coal in the UK between 1913 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares the number of deep coal mines in the United Kingdom from 1913 to 2015. Overall, the line graph represents a downward trend throughout the period. From 1913 to 1983 reported a significant decline. In contrast, between 2003 and 2005 remained stable. At the begining of the period, the number of production […]

Band 5+

The line graph gives information about the number of deep mines producing coal in the UK between 1913 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the number of deep coal mines operating in the UK between 1913 and 2015. Overall, the number of deep coal mines decreased dramatically throughout the period. The graph shows a clear downward trend, with the most significant decline occurring between 1913 and 1983. By the end of the period, only a […]

Band 8+

See All

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the birth rates of China and the US over the period from 1920 to 2000 changed. Overall, the birth rates in both countries declined over the 80-year period. The two trends are quite similar in terms of their overall decline. In most years, although there was an overall decline in both […]

Band 6+

The graph below shows the number of international tourists visiting three different countries between 2000 and 2010.

The line chart illustrates the number of international tourist arrivals in three countries between 2000 and 2010. Overall, all three countries followed a similar rising trend, especially France, which experienced a surge to become the country holding the leading position in the volume of incoming travelers. Regarding the USA, this country maintained an upward trajectory. […]

Band 7+

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Band 6+

The line graph illustrates the amount of spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007, in grams

The shown line graph illustrates the information on the consumption of 3 spreads: butter, lowfat and reduced spreads, and margarine over the period between 1981 and 2007. The data presented in grams. Overall, it can be seen that the consumption of lowfat and reduced spreads experienced a significant growth over the years, while the consumption […]

Band 6+

The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005

The line graph compares car ownership among UK household from 1975 to 2005. Overall, one-car ownership increased throughout the period, while the proportion of without car declined. The remaining two graphs growing up at the end of the year. In 1975, household of one-car showed considerable decrease of approximately 37%. Consequently, it increases by the […]

Band 5+

The graph below shows the percentage of female members of parliament in five European countries between 2000 and 2012.

The line chart compares the percentage of parliament who are female in Germany, Spain, Belgium, the UK and Italy. Overall, the data of five countries experienced an upward trend. To be specific, the figure of Spain and Belgium rose sharply from 2000 to 2004 while that of the UK and Italy skyrocketed from 2004 onwards. […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium