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Band 5+: The line graph show the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts a line graph showing the average number of weekly patients at four clinics from 2010 to 2016, broken down by clinic type: birth control, eye, diabetes, and dental. In 2010, birth control had 250 patients, eye had 75, diabetes had 50, and dental had 100. By 2012, birth control patients decreased to 200, eye increased to 150, diabetes remained at 50, and dental rose to 300. In 2014, birth control further dropped to around 175, eye clinics also saw around 175, diabetes increased slightly to around 75, and dental dropped significantly to 200. By 2016, birth control patients reduced to approximately 150, eye patients increased to about 275, diabetes climbed to 100, and dental surged to 400.

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The line charts illustrate the average amount of weekly patients visiting different clinics of a hospital over the next six years. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that patients increased to varying degrees except the diabetic clinic, which showed some fluctuation. Eye clinic which was the most unpopular hit the highest point though dental clinic remained stable.

From 2010 to 2012 birth control clinic reached its peak (280 patients) and was the most common. Despite the initial rise, the figures sharply declined after 2 years. By 2016 the number of patients was a little less than 250. However, eye clinic demonstrated only the strongest growth. From the beginning of the period the figures increased threefold (from 125 to 350).

While at the diabetic clinic, there was a negligible rise as opposed to starting point. The figures at the beginning of the period were fairly similiar to figures the in 2016 and rose to just 175 patients from a baseline of 75. In comparison with diabetic, dental clinic remained stable with a beginning data point of 100, a low of 50, and a final amount of 125.

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clinic: 7

patients: 4

figures: 4

diabetic: 3

point: 3

beginning: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., birth control peak of 280, eye clinic figures of 125 to 350, diabetic clinic rise to 175, dental clinic low of 50 and final of 125) that detract from the overall accuracy. The structure is present, but some descriptions are unclear or inconsistent with the visual information. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the key data points and trends, and ensure comparisons are clear and supported by the graph. Avoid vague statements like 'remained stable' when the data shows significant changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an overview and some comparisons, but the flow is occasionally disrupted by unclear references and awkward phrasing. For example, the sentence 'Eye clinic which was the most unpopular hit the highest point though dental clinic remained stable' is confusing and lacks clear connection. Paragraphing could be improved to separate trends more clearly, and the use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical. To improve, focus on creating smoother transitions between ideas and ensuring each paragraph has a clear central theme.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. Phrases like 'average amount of weekly patients' (should be 'number'), 'hit the highest point', and 'remained stable' are used, but there is repetition and some inaccuracies (e.g., 'similiar' misspelled). More sophisticated and varied vocabulary could be employed, such as 'fluctuated', 'peaked', or 'experienced a surge'. To improve, expand your lexical range and ensure word choices are precise and natural in context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include 'the figures sharply declined after 2 years' (missing article), 'figures the in 2016' (incorrect word order), and 'a beginning data point of 100' (unclear phrasing). There is also inconsistent tense usage and punctuation issues. To improve, focus on sentence structure variety, subject-verb agreement, and proofreading for common errors. Using a mix of simple and complex sentences correctly will enhance accuracy.

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