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Band 5+: The line graph shows changes in the number of people using public transport in Cambodia between 2023 and 2024.

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The image displays a line graph titled 'Changes in the Number of People Using Public Transport in Cambodia (2023-2024)', with the y-axis representing 'Number of People (in thousands)' and the x-axis representing 'Month'. For 2023, the monthly values in thousands are: Jan 1200, Feb 1300, Mar 1350, Apr 1400, May 1450, Jun 1500, Jul 1550, Aug 1600, Sep 1650, Oct 1700, Nov 1750, and Dec 1800. For 2024, the corresponding monthly values in thousands are: Jan 1250, Feb 1350, Mar 1400, Apr 1450, May 1500, Jun 1550, Jul 1600, Aug 1650, Sep 1700, Oct 1750, Nov 1800, and Dec 1850.

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The line graph give information about the change in number of people in Cambodia that uses public transport between 2023 and 2024 through the months of the year (January, February, March, April, May, June, July, August, September, October, November and December).

To compare between these two years, first the people who uses public transport increased in 2024 than 2023 with constant rise each month of the year. In January 2023 the number of people were 1200 while in 2024 in the same month it increased to ~1250.

Each month compared to the pervious year the public transport users were increasing ~50 people. The graph shows that users reached 1800 in December 2023 while in the same month the next year it reached ~1850. These changes show us the need for the public transports in Cambodia users are drastically increasing every month of these two years of 2023 and 2024.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

month: 5

people: 4

public: 4

transport: 3

these: 3

users: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and provides a clear comparison between the two years. You have successfully identified the upward trend and the consistent difference between the monthly figures of 2023 and 2024. To improve, try to avoid listing every single month in the introduction, as this is unnecessary; instead, use terms like 'throughout the year'. Additionally, ensure that you use the correct units (thousands) when reporting data to maintain accuracy, as stating '50 people' instead of '50,000 people' changes the scale of the information significantly. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is somewhat repetitive. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and the transition between sentences could be smoother. To improve, avoid listing all the months in the introduction, as this is unnecessary; instead, use phrases like 'throughout the twelve-month period.' Additionally, try to group information more logically rather than simply stating month-by-month comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive (e.g., repeating 'people' and 'increased'). There is also some awkward phrasing, such as 'the people who uses public transport increased in 2024 than 2023.' To achieve a higher score, aim to use a wider variety of synonyms for 'increase' (e.g., rose, climbed, grew, surged) and 'people' (e.g., commuters, passengers, users). Work on using more precise academic collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that impact the clarity of the report. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'graph give' instead of 'graph gives', 'people who uses' instead of 'people who use') and incorrect comparative structures (e.g., 'increased... than'). There is also a lack of complex sentence structures. Focus on mastering basic subject-verb agreement and practicing comparative and superlative forms to improve accuracy and range.

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