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Band 5+: The line graph shows the average monthly spending (in dollars) on three categories - food, entertainment, and transportation - by a group of people between 2010 and 2020. Data: Food: 300 (2010), 320 (2012), 350 (2014), 370 (2016), 400 (2018), 420 (2020) Entertainment: 150 (2010), 200 (2012), 250 (2014), 300 (2016), 350 (2018), 380 (2020) Transportation: 200 (2010), 220 (2012), 240 (2014), 260 (2016), 280 (2018), 300 (2020)

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Image for topic: The line graph shows the average monthly spending (in dollars) on three categories - food, entertainment, and transportation - by a group of people between 2010 and 2020. Data: Food: 300 (2010), 320 (2012), 350 (2014), 370 (2016), 400 (2018), 420 (2020) Entertainment: 150 (2010), 200 (2012), 250 (2014), 300 (2016), 350 (2018), 380 (2020) Transportation: 200 (2010), 220 (2012), 240 (2014), 260 (2016), 280 (2018), 300 (2020)

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The image is a line chart titled "Average Monthly Spending (2010-2020)" with a Y-axis for Spending (USD) and an X-axis for Year, displaying data for three categories. Food spending in USD was: 2010, 300; 2012, 320; 2014, 350; 2016, 370; 2018, 400; 2020, 420. Entertainment spending in USD was: 2010, 150; 2012, 200; 2014, 250; 2016, 300; 2018, 350; 2020, 380. Transportation spending in USD was: 2010, 200; 2012, 220; 2014, 240; 2016, 260; 2018, 280; 2020, 300.

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The given line chart gives information about average monthly spending on three different categories which is food, entertainment and transportation, between 2010 to 2020.

Overall, it is clear that spending on the all three things increased day by day over the period. In 2010, food graph shows that spending 300 it increased gradually and in 2020 it reached around 440. Also in the entertainment started 200 by the past 5 years later in reached 340 in shows that is increased sharply and people spent there money around 300 usd it incresed sharply and in 2020 this spend stand around 440 usd. Similarly, spending on transportation rose gradully from 200 usd in 2010 to approximately 300 usd in 2008.

On the other hand, entertainment had the lowest spending at the beginning of the period, at just 150 usd in 2010. However, it increased significintly to around $250 in 2014.

In conclusion, food remained the largest spending category, while entertainment showed the fastest increase.

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The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the categories, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the final values for food and entertainment are incorrectly stated as around 440, and the transportation data is misreported as reaching 300 in 2008 instead of 2020. The report also lacks a clear structure, with some repetitive and unclear phrasing. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data, organizing the information into clear paragraphs (e.g., overview, detailed trends), and using precise language to describe changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the second paragraph mixes details about all three categories without clear separation, and the phrase 'Also in the entertainment started 200 by the past 5 years later in reached 340' is confusing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, organize the body into clear paragraphs for each category or group similar trends, and use a range of linking words and referencing (e.g., 'this figure', 'the former', 'the latter') to guide the reader smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There are some attempts at appropriate terms like 'increased gradually' and 'increased sharply', but there are also errors such as 'spending 300' and 'people spent there money'. The report would benefit from a wider variety of synonyms for 'increase' (e.g., 'rose', 'climbed', 'surged') and more precise language to describe trends (e.g., 'remained the highest', 'saw a steady rise'). Avoid informal or incorrect phrasing and ensure word choice is accurate and natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that impede clarity. Examples include 'between 2010 to 2020' (should be 'from 2010 to 2020'), 'spending on the all three things' (should be 'spending on all three things'), 'it increased gradually' (missing subject), and 'in reached 340' (incorrect structure). There are also spelling errors like 'gradully' and 'significintly'. The range of sentence structures is limited, with many simple and repetitive patterns. To improve, focus on using a variety of complex sentences, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for spelling and punctuation.

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