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Band 7+: The line graph shows the average price of tickets sold in the theatre and the bar graph shows the percentage of tickets sold in 2010 and 2011

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The image presents two graphics; the first showcasing "Price pounds" and the second "Percentage". For "Price pounds", Q1 lists slightly above 9, Q2 at 10.5, Q3 maintains at 10.5, Q4 drops to 10, Q1 (following year) slightly below 10, Q2 decreases further to 9.5, Q3 remains at 9.5, and Q4 rises back to 10. The "Percentage" table for 2010 shows Q1 at 70%, Q2 at 40%, Q3 at 50%, Q4 spikes to 90%; for 2011: Q1 at 0%, Q2 at 10%, Q3 at 20%, and Q4 at 80%.

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The line graph illustrates the average theatre ticket prices from the first quarter of 2010 to the final quarter of 2011, while the bar chart compares the average percentage of tickets during the same period.

Overall, average price of tickets increased sharply from 9.2 to nearly 10.5 in early 2010 and stayed a high level for the rest of time. Meanwhile, the average percentage of tickets sold increased significantly across these eight quarters.

In terms of ticket price, the starting figure in Q1 2010 was around 9.2. It jumped quickly to 10.5 by Q3 2010 and remained stable until Q1 2011. There was a small drop to 10.2 in Q2 2011，and back to 10.5 in Q3 2011.

For average percentage of tickets sold, the three quarters in 2010 all had sales close to 60%, with a striking peak at 100% in 2010 Q4. And fall to 25% in two quarters in 2011 and grew to 90% in Q4 2011.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

average: 5

tickets: 4

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing both the line graph and bar chart, and includes an overall trend. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., starting price of 9.2, peak at 100%, and the description of the percentage trend). The structure is clear, but the language could be more precise. Focus on accurately representing the data and avoiding minor errors in figures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs for each chart. However, the cohesion could be improved. The transition between the two main paragraphs is abrupt, and the use of linking words is somewhat limited. The final paragraph contains a run-on sentence that affects the flow. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to connect ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'illustrates', 'compares', 'jumped quickly', 'striking peak'). However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'average' is used multiple times) and a few inaccuracies (e.g., 'stayed a high level' should be 'stayed at a high level'). The range of vocabulary is adequate but could be expanded with more sophisticated terms to achieve a higher score. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'stayed a high level' is missing a preposition, 'And fall to 25%' is a sentence fragment, and there is a comma splice in 'Q2 2011，and back to 10.5'. The use of tenses is inconsistent in places. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and proper sentence construction.

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