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Band 6+: The line graph shows the energy consumption in Country X between 2000 and 2018.

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The image displays line graphs for energy consumption in Country X from 2000 to 2018. For renewable energy: 2000, 10%; 2002, 12%; 2004, 14%; 2006, 18%; 2008, 20%; 2010, 22%; 2012, 26%; 2014, 30%; 2016, 32%; 2018, 35%. For non-renewable energy: 2000, 90%; 2002, 88%; 2004, 86%; 2006, 82%; 2008, 80%; 2010, 78%; 2012, 74%; 2014, 70%; 2016, 68%; 2018, 65%.

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The line graph demonstrates a consumption of renewable and non-renewable energy between 2000 and 2018. The vertical axis illustrates percentage of consumption whereas horizontal axis shows the period of graph.

The consumption of non-renewable energy has gradually reduced across the graph. In the period 2000-2004 traditional sources of energy contains almost 95% of total comsumption. However this tendention decreases constantly between 2006 and 2018. Each 2 years a non-renewable energy resources reduced by 1.5-2% and made up 80% in 2010 as well as 70% in 2018.

Conversely, the alternative sources on energy increased slightly at this time. At first a renewable power amounted only 5% of total consumption in 2000-2004. After that the percentage of green energy grown by 1.5-2% each two years and took almost 20% of all power sources in 2010. Due to this tendency the amount of renewable energy rised to 30% in 2018.

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energy: 7

consumption: 4

renewable: 3

non-renewable: 3

sources: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in the graph, noting the decrease in non-renewable energy consumption and the increase in renewable energy consumption. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data cited (e.g., 'almost 95%' and 'only 5%'). To improve, ensure greater accuracy in the data presented and avoid approximations when specific figures are available. Also, the writing could be more concise and avoid some repetition. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but there are some lapses in coherence. The organization is present, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between sentences and ideas. Paragraphing is adequate, but could be more skillfully managed to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The report uses an adequate range of vocabulary, but there are instances where more precise or sophisticated word choices could be used. Some vocabulary is not entirely appropriate for the context. For example, 'tendention' should be 'trend'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a fair range of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors in grammar and punctuation that affect clarity. Correcting these errors would significantly improve the overall quality of the report. For example, 'contains' should be 'contained', 'comsumption' should be 'consumption', 'Each 2 years' should be 'Every 2 years', 'rised' should be 'rose'.

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