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Band 4+: The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph of the monthly incomes of four cafes in New York: The Tea Room, Internet Express, Wi-Fi Café, and Café Cool over the last year, measured in 000s Dollars. The Tea Room: Jan-160, Feb-120, Mar-110, Apr-130, May-120, Jun-140, Jul-100, Aug-170, Sep-160, Oct-60, Nov-180, Dec-190. Internet Express: Jan-100, Feb-100, Mar-90, Apr-100, May-110, Jun-100, Jul-130, Aug-140, Sep-100, Oct-90, Nov-80, Dec-70. Wi-Fi Café: Jan-50, Feb-50, Mar-60, Apr-70, May-60, Jun-60, Jul-50, Aug-60, Sep-110, Oct-100, Nov-100, Dec-120. Café Cool: Jan-0, Feb-20, Mar-10, Apr-20, May-10, Jun-10, Jul-0, Aug-10, Sep-10, Oct-100, Nov-110, Dec-110.

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The line graph illustrates information about how much money was earned by four various cafes in New York previous year.

Overall, it can be clearly seen from the graph that statistics of Cafe Cool, Wife Cafe, Internet Express increased noticeably, while the figure of the Tea Room saw a noticeable drop over the period, provided. Another interesting point is that, the Tea Room was the famous bakery in January, but in November Wife Cafe was earned more money than others.

Looking at the details, as regards Cafe Cool earnings started around 30000$ in January, then there was a fluctuation over the next 10 months, then the figure went up dramatically at around 120000$ in December. If we look at the Wife Cafe the trend was similar. The Wife Cafe saw a noticable growth to just over 100000$ in January. Despite falling considerably at around 62000$ in September, the figure then increase at 180000$ in November. As for, the income of Internet Express levelled off in the first half of the year, earnings then grew significantly reaching nearly 140000$ in November.

By contrast, the salary of Tea Room went into the opposite direction. Takings fluctuated at around 140000$ until October. After that, the figure drop gradually at over 45000$ until December.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task and identifies some trends, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and terminology. The student frequently misidentifies the names of the cafes (e.g., 'Wife Cafe' instead of 'Wi-Fi Café') and uses inappropriate terms like 'salary' when referring to business income. Furthermore, many of the reported figures do not align with the provided data (e.g., stating Cafe Cool started at $30,000 or that Tea Room dropped to $45,000). To improve, focus on accurately transcribing the names and data points from the visual, and ensure that the vocabulary used is appropriate for a business context (e.g., using 'revenue' or 'income' rather than 'salary').

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is frequently interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While you attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'Looking at the details', 'By contrast'), they are often used incorrectly or followed by punctuation errors that disrupt the flow. To improve, focus on using transition words more naturally and ensure that each paragraph has a clear, singular purpose. Avoid starting sentences with 'If we look at...' in a formal report; instead, use direct comparative structures.

Lexical Resource

There is a limited range of vocabulary, and several word choices are inappropriate for an academic report. For example, 'salary' is used to describe business income, and 'famous bakery' is an assumption not supported by the graph. Additionally, there are spelling errors (e.g., 'Wife Cafe' instead of 'Wi-Fi Café') and repetitive use of 'the figure'. Try to use a wider variety of synonyms for 'income' (such as 'revenue', 'earnings', or 'takings') and ensure you use the correct terminology for the subjects provided in the prompt.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the clarity of your message. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the figure then increase'), tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., 'Wife Cafe was earned more money'). Punctuation is also a major issue, with unnecessary commas and run-on sentences. I recommend practicing complex sentence structures and focusing on the correct use of prepositions when describing trends (e.g., 'increased to' vs 'increased by'). Pay close attention to the distinction between active and passive voice.

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