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Band 4+: The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph of the monthly incomes of four cafes in New York: The Tea Room, Internet Express, Wi-Fi Café, and Café Cool over the last year, measured in 000s Dollars. The Tea Room: Jan-160, Feb-120, Mar-110, Apr-130, May-120, Jun-140, Jul-100, Aug-170, Sep-160, Oct-60, Nov-180, Dec-190. Internet Express: Jan-100, Feb-100, Mar-90, Apr-100, May-110, Jun-100, Jul-130, Aug-140, Sep-100, Oct-90, Nov-80, Dec-70. Wi-Fi Café: Jan-50, Feb-50, Mar-60, Apr-70, May-60, Jun-60, Jul-50, Aug-60, Sep-110, Oct-100, Nov-100, Dec-120. Café Cool: Jan-0, Feb-20, Mar-10, Apr-20, May-10, Jun-10, Jul-0, Aug-10, Sep-10, Oct-100, Nov-110, Dec-110.

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The bar graph delineates the earned profits of four differents cafes located in New York during the previous year.

Overall, it is clear the data shows the fluctuating trends which The Tea Room had the highest income in the beginning, and it experience downward to reach a lowest in the end of the year.

At the beginning of the year, The Tea Room gained the highest profits, at around 160,000s Dollars. It was a fluctuation trends from January to July at approximately 130,000s Dollars. After levelled of in angusut, it was experience a fluctuating trend and dropped sharply over the end of the period at 40,000s Dollar. While, the opposite trends of the Wifi Cafes, a gradual decline was seen in January, starting at 50,000s Dollars. But than a sharp increase was experience to 190,000s Dollars in Decembers

Moving to internet express and cafe cool in the first month of the year, the figure for internet express and cafe cool was about 100,000s and 50,000 Dollars respectively. After fluctuating, internet express and cafe cool was rose steadily, at around 130,000s and 120,0001 Dollars.

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The report has several inaccuracies and misunderstandings of the data. The graph is misidentified as a bar graph. The description of the trends is not accurate, and there are significant errors in reporting the data values. The structure is also weak, lacking a clear overview and logical organization of details. To improve, focus on accurately interpreting the data, using correct graph terminology, and organizing the information in a clear and logical manner. Pay attention to specific data points and trends to avoid misrepresentation.

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The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice. There is some attempt to use more descriptive language, but it is not always successful. To improve lexical resource, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and changes in data. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms for common words and phrases, and pay attention to the specific nuances of different words.

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