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Band 6+: The line graph shows the percentage of people using public transport in Germany, Canada and Brazil between 2000 and 2020.

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The image is a line graph titled 'Percentage of People Using Public Transport in Germany, Canada and Brazil (2000-2020)', charting data on a vertical axis from 0 to 100 percent. For Germany, the data points are: 2000 (40%), 2005 (55%), 2010 (50%), 2015 (65%), and 2020 (60%). For Canada, the data points are: 2000 (30%), 2005 (35%), 2010 (45%), 2015 (70%), and 2020 (75%). For Brazil, the data points are: 2000 (20%), 2005 (25%), 2010 (40%), 2015 (35%), and 2020 (50%).

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The line graph illustrates the proportion of public transport usage in Germany, Canada, and Brazil from 2000 to 2020.

Overall, the use of public transport in Canada showed an increasing trend. However, Germany and Brazil showed fluctuating trends. In the beginning, Germany’s trend was the highest, but Canada exceeded Germany in the end.

In 2000, the percentage of people using public transport in Canada increased slightly, but in 2010 it started rising sharply and reached 70% in 2015, and overtook Germany around 2012. However, during another 5 years, it showed a slight rise by 5%.

Finally, Germany was the highest in the beginning, but it couldn’t increase steadily, which is why Germany ended up second. Similarly, Brazil’s trend showed fluctuating increase, and they end up the lowest in 2020.

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and provides some specific data points, but there are some omissions and a lack of precision. To improve, focus on providing more specific data and avoid vague language. Also, ensure that all key features of the graph are addressed. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and some attempt at grouping information. However, the transitions between some sentences and ideas could be smoother. For instance, the shift from Canada's trend to Germany's and Brazil's trends in the second paragraph feels a bit abrupt. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the flow of the report.

Lexical Resource

The report uses adequate vocabulary to describe the trends and data. However, there's room for improvement by incorporating a wider range of vocabulary related to describing changes and comparisons. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'increase' or 'rise,' try using synonyms like 'growth,' 'escalation,' or 'uptick.' Also, consider using more precise language to describe the fluctuations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are some noticeable errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'Canada increased slightly' is not quite idiomatic. Pay closer attention to sentence structure and word choice to ensure accuracy and clarity. Proofreading carefully can help identify and correct these errors.

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