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Band 5+: The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a world map depicting willingness to eat insect-based products, with numerical data showing willingness and unwillingness percentages: USA 35% willing, Mexico 71%, Peru 58%, Brazil 45%, UK 36%, Spain 33%, France 34%, Russia 32%, India 39%, China 44%, Thailand 56%, Japan 21%, Australia 34%, South Africa 39%.

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In recent years, it has become common for both parents to work full time. As a result, children spend less time with their parents. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this trend and the problems it may cause for families.

One of the main reasons why both parents work is rising cost of living.I can say that many families want to build careers and achieve financial stability. Therefore their busy work shedules, they have limited time to spend with their children during the week.

This situation can cause several problems. Firstly, children may feel lonely and emitionally neglected, which can affect their mental development.On the other hand, a lack of communication between parents and children may weaken family relationship. People should attention time division in the married which can lead to negative infuenced for children.

In Conclusion, both parents and their children attention to take time of togethet. This is crucial for family relationships which communitation becomes happiness.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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children: 5

their: 5

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Task Response

The response generally addresses the task but includes some irrelevant information and inaccuracies. The first body paragraph only discusses one reason for the trend. The second body paragraph discusses problems, but the ideas are not fully developed. To improve, provide more specific examples and expand on the potential consequences of children spending less time with their parents. Also, ensure that your ideas are clearly linked to the prompt.

Coherence & Cohesion

The essay demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The introduction states the essay's purpose, and there's an attempt to structure the body into reasons and problems. However, the connection between sentences within paragraphs needs improvement. For example, the transition between the rising cost of living and building careers could be smoother. The conclusion is weak and doesn't effectively summarize the main points. To improve coherence, focus on using clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that each sentence logically follows from the previous one. Using cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' 'however') more effectively would also enhance the flow of the essay.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice ('shedules' instead of 'schedules,' 'emitionally' instead of 'emotionally,' 'infuenced' instead of 'influence'). To improve lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more specific and nuanced. Focus on learning synonyms and collocations related to the topic of family and work. Proofread carefully to avoid spelling errors.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The essay contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include incorrect sentence structure ('Therefore their busy work shedules, they have limited time...'), incorrect verb forms ('People should attention time division...'), and issues with articles and prepositions. The range of grammatical structures is limited. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, such as subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper use of articles and prepositions. Practice writing different types of sentences (e.g., complex sentences, compound sentences) to increase the range of structures used.

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