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Band 4+: The map below show a beachfront area in Australia in 195 anh the same area today

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The image displays two diagrams depicting a beachfront area in Australia for the years 1950 and today. The 1950 map shows a single car park on the right, a pavilion at the end of a straight path, a beach leading into the sea, a lighthouse in the southeast corner, a small road leading to the city in the northwest corner, a playground adjacent to the car park, and a pool area north of the beach along the beach road. The present day's map indicates two car parks, one on the west before the playground and another parallel to the pavilion, a relocated playground positioned between the two car parks, a constructed restaurant situated to the west of the promenade road, an extended promenade road with a bend connecting the two car parks, a still-present beach alongside new swimming facilities including a 50m pool and a children's pool to the north of the beach area, and a surf club along the extended promenade road, with the lighthouse remaining unchanged at the location southeast.

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The maps give detailed information of how a Beachfront area in Australia changed between 1950 and today. Overall, the Beachfront are went from a somewhat small resort beach to a full-fledged vacation spot.

In 1950, the middle of the beach was occupied by pool, with a depth of 25-metres. The lighthouse was situated below the 25-metre pool. On the northeast part, a carpark was located with an exit connecting to the road. Beside it was a pavilion and children’s playground was adjacent to that.

Currently, the pool was enlarged and it became 50-metres deep. Next to the pool, surf club and restaurant were erected. The entrance road was expanded and the playground was removed to make way for the car park. Lighthouse and pavilion were remained intact

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The report addresses the task by describing changes between 1950 and today, and includes an overall statement. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions: the pool is described as '25-metres deep' and '50-metres deep' which is not supported by the visual description; the playground is said to be removed, but it was relocated; the restaurant and surf club locations are not precisely described; and the promenade road extension and bend are not mentioned. The report would benefit from more accurate data representation and a clearer structure highlighting key changes. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an overview and some paragraphing, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the description of the 1950 map jumps between locations without clear logical connections. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, focus on using a range of linking words and phrases to show relationships between changes, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. Some terms are used inaccurately, such as 'depth' for pool size and 'deep' for length. There is also repetition of basic words like 'pool' and 'car park'. To enhance lexical resource, incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to maps and changes (e.g., 'relocated', 'expanded', 'constructed'), and use synonyms to avoid repetition. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement issues ('the pool was enlarged'), incorrect tense usage ('were remained'), and missing articles ('a pool', 'the playground'). Sentence structures are mostly simple. To improve, practice using a mix of simple and complex sentences, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for common errors like article usage and verb forms.

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