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Band 8+: The map shows how coastal land developed to a coastal park. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts two diagrams labeled "Before Development" and "After Development." Before development, the area includes a road running above an unused land area and animal section, adjacent to farm buildings and agricultural land. Below these, cliffs lead down to a beach and the sea. After development, the road is retained with a new café added in place of unused land; a car park is situated where farm buildings were, surrounded by footpaths; the agricultural land area is replaced by woodlands; steps now lead from the car park to the beach and sea.

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The maps illustrate the process of transitioning a coastal land into a coastal park.

Overall, the subsequent change of the land had completely transformed with new buildings and more amenities.

Before the innovation, there was a main road running from the west to the east, which connected with a side road leading to the center of the land where was used for erecting two parallel buildings used for farming. The place on the western side was abandoned and had many living organisms living there. On the right-handed side, there was a land reserving for crop cultivation.

After being reformed, the place, which was linked to the side road, turned into a parking lot. There was also a new café opened up close to the main road. On the west, the land was excavated into a lake surrounded by lots of green trees, and there was footpath stretched from the lake to the wood. To the east, the agricultural land was planted more trees to change into a forest with numerous trees allocated densely. Finally, a new step had been installed on the cliff for conveniently getting to the beach.

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main changes from coastal land to a coastal park. It covers key features such as the addition of a café, car park, footpaths, woodlands, and steps to the beach. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the report mentions a lake and a forest, which are not clearly indicated in the visual description (the description mentions woodlands and trees, but not a lake or dense forest). Additionally, the report does not explicitly mention the retention of the road or the transformation of unused land and animal section into a café, though it implies these changes. The overview is clear, and the organization is logical. To improve, ensure all key features are accurately reported and avoid adding details not present in the visual. Minor language issues (e.g., 'where was used', 'right-handed side') slightly affect clarity but do not impede understanding.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear introduction, overall summary, and detailed body paragraphs. The progression of ideas is logical and easy to follow. Cohesive devices are used effectively, though occasionally slightly mechanical (e.g., 'Before the innovation', 'After being reformed'). Paragraphing is appropriate. To enhance coherence, consider varying transition phrases and ensuring each paragraph focuses on a clear central theme.

Lexical Resource

A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately, with some less common terms (e.g., 'excavated', 'allocated densely'). There is good paraphrasing (e.g., 'transitioning', 'subsequent change'). However, a few word choices are slightly imprecise or awkward (e.g., 'living organisms' for animals, 'right-handed side', 'land reserving for crop cultivation'). More natural collocations and precise terms would improve the score. Overall, the lexical resource is strong and demonstrates flexibility.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

A variety of complex structures is used with a good degree of control. Grammar and punctuation are largely accurate, with only minor errors (e.g., 'where was used' should be 'which was used', 'a land reserving' should be 'a land reserved'). These do not impede understanding. To reach a higher band, aim for even greater accuracy and more sophisticated sentence structures.

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