Band 6+: The maps show the town of Wilden in 1990 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main changes in Wilden between 1990 and today, with a clear overview and relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: for example, the report states that all factories were removed and replaced by blocks of flats, but the visual shows only one factory was removed and the other may have been retained; also, the cafe is described as being replaced by flats, which is not clearly supported. Additionally, the report mentions a 'caffee' from 1990, which is not in the visual. The description of the park relocation and enlargement is accurate, but the mention of 'several trees' is not in the visual. The language is generally clear, though there are minor errors (e.g., 'caffee', 'Additionaly', 'Regarding to'). To improve, ensure all key features are accurately reported and avoid adding details not present in the visual. Overall, the response covers the requirements with some lapses.

The report is generally well-organised, with a clear overall summary and logical grouping of changes by location. However, some transitions are slightly abrupt, and the use of cohesive devices could be more varied and precise. For instance, the phrase 'Regarding to the north side' is awkward and should be 'Regarding the north side' or 'As for the north side'. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved by separating the waterfront changes from the northern changes more distinctly. To enhance coherence, consider using a wider range of linking words and ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single clear aspect.

The vocabulary used is adequate and includes some less common terms such as 'transport depot', 'community centre', and 'relocated'. However, there are several spelling and word choice errors, such as 'caffee' instead of 'café' and 'Additionaly' instead of 'Additionally'. The range of vocabulary is sufficient for the task, but more precise and varied lexical choices would improve the score. For example, 'factory focused area' could be 'industrial area', and 'expanded amenities' could be 'additional amenities'. Pay attention to spelling and use more sophisticated synonyms where appropriate.

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors that affect clarity. These include subject-verb agreement ('all factories was removed'), incorrect preposition use ('Regarding to'), and tense inconsistencies ('had been built' vs. 'was built'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are run-ons or lack proper conjunctions. To improve, focus on accurate verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct preposition usage. Proofreading for these common errors will enhance grammatical accuracy.