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Band 6+: The maps show the town of Wilden in 1990 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image compares waterfront areas between 1990 and today: In 1990, there was a transport depot, two factories, a park, five homes, a waterfront with three block of flats, a road, and a river. By today, changes include a community centre replacing the transport depot, the park's relocation and enlargement, removal of the second factory and addition of a cafe, mini golf course, and tables with chairs near the waterfront, along with retention of four homes and river.

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The maps illustrates the changes that took place in the town Wilden between 1990 and at the present.

Overall, the town showed significant number of buildings that was removed, especially all the factories. In addition, the area become more residential by building flats, planting trees and expanding the area of the park.

On the southern side of the town, that is the coast, had several factories and a café in 1990. Now on its former site was built flats and a restaurant with tables and chairs.

On the northern side, there was a transport depot that was demolished and replaced by trees. Furthermore, on the top of the area houses was remained unchanged and only two of them was removed. By contrast, the park initially took up small space, but the factories were removed and it was expanded. The initial area of the park saw a construction of community centre. While the town saw a considerable change, the main road remained unchanged.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by summarizing the main changes in Wilden between 1990 and today, with a clear overall trend. Key features such as the removal of factories, addition of residential buildings, and park expansion are covered. However, there are some inaccuracies: the report mentions a café in 1990 and a restaurant today, whereas the visual indicates a café was added today; it also states the transport depot was replaced by trees, but the visual shows a community centre. Additionally, the report says only two houses were removed, but the visual indicates one was removed. These minor inaccuracies do not detract significantly from the overall response. To improve, ensure all key changes are accurately reported and consider organizing the comparison more systematically, perhaps by grouping changes by location or type.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, there are some issues with coherence and cohesion. The use of cohesive devices is sometimes inaccurate or awkward (e.g., 'that is the coast', 'Now on its former site was built flats'), which can disrupt the flow. Paragraphing is logical but could be more skillfully managed; for instance, the grouping of changes could be more balanced. To improve, focus on using a wider range of cohesive devices accurately and ensuring that each paragraph has a clear central topic. Additionally, proofreading for grammatical errors will enhance overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate to convey the main ideas, but there is limited flexibility and sophistication. Some word choices are imprecise or awkward (e.g., 'showed significant number of buildings that was removed', 'the area become more residential by building flats'). There is an attempt to use a variety of vocabulary, but errors in collocation and word form reduce clarity. To improve, aim to use more precise and natural lexical items, and expand your range of vocabulary related to urban development and change. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and singular/plural forms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors that affect accuracy. These include subject-verb agreement ('the maps illustrates', 'the area become'), incorrect passive constructions ('was built flats', 'was remained'), and article usage. Punctuation is generally correct, but some sentences are awkwardly constructed. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, particularly subject-verb agreement and passive voice. Practice constructing a variety of complex sentences accurately, and proofread your work to eliminate errors.

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