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Band 4+: The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.

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The image contains two maps labeled "Frenton" with different years, 1980 and 2012, top and bottom respectively. Both maps have a compass indicating North to the right. The 1980 map shows: SCHOOL, BANK, HOSPITAL, LIBRARY, playing fields with TREES; TREES, CAFÉ AND PARK, HOUSES, THEATRE, and SHOPS arranged in labeled blocks; a horizontal road labeled "HIGH STREET" runs through the center. The 2012 map depicts: SCHOOL, RESTAURANT, HOSPITAL, LIBRARY, TECHNOPARK, HOTEL, and GOLF COURSE, CINEMA, BLOCKS OF FLATS, FLATS, and SUPERMARKET similarly arranged; "HIGH STREET" divides the map.

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The maps illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012.

Overall, frenton underwent significant development, with addition of Technopark, while open space was replaced by Flats, and Houses are were demolished and replaced by Blocks of Flats.

In 1990 Frenton has a playing area which was replaced by Blocks of Flats and also shops area become a supermarket, the Bank was removed and replaced by a Resturant, while the Hospital area expanded as well.

Another notable change was in Cafe and Park which was replaced by Hotel and Golf Course. The Theater was change into the Cinema.

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The report covers the main changes in Frenton between 1990 and 2012. However, the organization could be improved by grouping changes thematically or geographically. Also, the report contains some inaccuracies (e.g., the year in the introduction) and could benefit from more precise language and detail. For example, instead of saying "Hospital area expanded as well", you could specify what was added to the hospital area. Also, the report could benefit from an introductory paragraph that provides a general overview of the changes. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and transitions between ideas. The sentences are somewhat disjointed, making it difficult to follow the changes in Frenton. Paragraphing could be improved to group related changes together. For example, changes in recreational areas could be discussed in one paragraph, while changes in commercial areas could be discussed in another. Using cohesive devices such as 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' or 'conversely' would enhance the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and varied. While the report identifies some key changes, it relies on simple terms like 'replaced' and 'change.' Incorporating more specific vocabulary related to urban development, such as 'redeveloped,' 'converted,' or 'expanded,' would improve the report. Additionally, using synonyms to avoid repetition would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('Frenton has' instead of 'Frenton had'), subject-verb agreement issues ('Houses are were demolished'), and awkward phrasing ('Theater was change into the Cinema'). Correcting these errors and ensuring accurate sentence structure is crucial. Varying sentence structures and using a wider range of grammatical structures would also improve the overall quality of the report.

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