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Band 6+: The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and the same area today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two diagrams, 'Beachfront area, 1950' and 'Beachfront area, today'. The 1950 diagram shows a road, a playground, picnic tables, a Pavilion, a single Car park, a Beach, a Lighthouse, and two separate 25m pools. The 'today' diagram shows a road, two separate Car parks, a Restaurant, a Surf club west of the beach, a 50m pool, picnic tables, a Pavilion, the Beach, the Lighthouse, a 25m pool, and another Surf club east of the beach.

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The given map illustrates the significant renovation of a beachfront area in Australia from 1950 to the present day.

Overall, it is readily apparent that a beachfront area has undergone several changes with increasing of a beach area and additional amenities. Additionally, the beachfront area has experienced extraction of some buildings and expanded of road.

In detail, the children’s playground, which was situated on the west side of the beachfront area, has been removed and converted into a car park area. The Pavilion has been modernized with changes of color, which located next to the second car park area. Not only a green area has been extended to the east of beachfront area, but also the size of second car park has been widened. Furthermore, the main road, which came from city, has extended to the direct reach the lighthouse in the beach area.

Regarding beach area, after the sea level rise, the size of first swimming pool, which was located on the west side of the beach, has been increased from 25 meter to 50 meter. Next to first swimming pool, the surf club and the restaurant have been constructed on the west side of the beach. The second swimming pool, which was lay on east side of the beach, remained the same size in 25 meter, and the second surf club has been built on the east side of it. Moreover, the height of the lighthouse has been increased after rising sea level.

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beach: 6

beachfront: 5

which: 5

second: 4

swimming: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main changes and making comparisons between the two time periods. It covers key features such as the removal of the playground, expansion of car parks, road extension, and changes to the pools and new facilities. However, there are some inaccuracies and unsupported details (e.g., 'sea level rise', 'height of the lighthouse increased', 'changes of color') that are not present in the visual description. The report would be stronger if it focused strictly on the information shown in the diagrams. Additionally, some phrasing is awkward (e.g., 'increasing of a beach area', 'extraction of some buildings'), and the organization could be improved by grouping related changes more clearly. Overall, the main features are identified and compared, but minor lapses in accuracy and clarity prevent a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'the first swimming pool' and 'the second swimming pool' are not clearly defined). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Not only a green area has been extended...' is grammatically incorrect and affects coherence). Paragraphing is present but could be more logically organized, with the second paragraph mixing unrelated changes. To improve, ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear set of features and use a wider range of linking words and referencing techniques to guide the reader smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing maps (e.g., 'undergone', 'converted into', 'modernized', 'constructed'). However, there are several lexical inaccuracies and awkward collocations (e.g., 'increasing of a beach area', 'extraction of some buildings', 'expanded of road', 'changes of color'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some terms are repeated (e.g., 'beachfront area', 'car park'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'demolished', 'relocated', 'expanded', 'renovated', and ensure correct word forms and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the size of first swimming pool... has been increased' is correct, but 'which was lay' is incorrect), incorrect use of articles (e.g., 'the first swimming pool' vs. 'a 25m pool'), and awkward sentence structures (e.g., 'Not only a green area has been extended...' should be 'Not only has a green area been extended...'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but the range of grammatical structures is limited, with frequent use of simple and compound sentences. To improve, practice using a wider variety of complex structures, ensure correct verb tenses and forms, and proofread for common errors.

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