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Band 5+: The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and the same area today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two maps of a beachfront area: 'Beachfront area, 1950' and 'Beachfront area, today'. The 1950 map features a road 'To city', a playground, picnic tables, a Pavilion, one 'Car park' to the east, a Beach, a western 25m pool, and an eastern 25m pool next to a Lighthouse. The 'today' map shows the road 'To city', two 'Car park' areas flanking the Pavilion, picnic tables, the Pavilion, the Beach, a western section containing a Restaurant, a 'Surf club', and a 50m pool, and an eastern section with a 25m pool, a 'Surf club', the Lighthouse, and a newly extended road.

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Contained in the diagram is the information about the changes of the beach area in Australia from1950 to today.Overall,the huge development has taken place to the road which was extended in order to provide greater accessibility to light house.Futhermore there has been an expansion in facilities from minimally equipped to modern recreational.

Beginning with the north,it can be observed that the car park has been expanded to both sides of the pavilion ,while the playground which made the area for family was replaced with car park.Futhermore,the dining tables and pavilion still remain.Additionally,the pool’s facilities were upgraded.

Moving to the southern part,the huge changes was near the beach where it used to have 25m pool and now it has been expanded to 50m.A new restaurant and surf club have been added to respond demand’s people.Finally,the expensive change was used for the road which was expanded in order to provide a easier accessibility to the light house.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

The report covers the main features and makes comparisons between the two time periods. However, there are some inaccuracies (e.g., 'expensive change' instead of 'extensive change') and omissions (e.g., the eastern 25m pool and surf club are not mentioned). The structure is logical, but the language could be more precise and formal. Focus on accurate vocabulary and ensure all key features are included.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure but lacks clear paragraphing and cohesive devices. The flow is disrupted by abrupt transitions and missing connectors. Consider using linking words and phrases to improve the connection between ideas, and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the map.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'expensive change', 'respond demand's people'). There is repetition of basic terms. To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to maps and changes, such as 'expansion', 'relocation', 'addition', and 'upgrade'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('changes was'), incorrect prepositions, and missing articles. Sentence structures are often simple or flawed. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures and proofread for common errors.

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