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Band 4+: The maps below show the changes in the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950.

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The image depicts a map of Langley in 1910, showing townhouses, a factory, a store, laundry and café facilities, railway workers' cottages, and areas of wasteland, all separated by Jordan and Sherman Streets, with a railway line running along the bottom; no numerical data or percentages are provided.

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According to the map we can compare Langley in 1910 and 1950. We need to understand how changed nature and structures.

Langley, 1910 we can see Factory which produces materials, and very few store, in the centre, there is sherman street, along which there are small houses. The railway line was near houses, it is not good because the railway it can disturb people.

Langley, 1950

Firstly we can see many stores appeared, as well as a laundry and cafe. sherman park where people enjoy nature, also made children play area, where children can play and have fun. The houses very big than in 1910. Building mansions instead of factory. Also area became more expansive.

Conclusion, in my opinion is that 1950 was better than 1910 because more opportunities appeared, the houses became bigger. Sherman Park and more market were built

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and irrelevant information, particularly regarding the changes between 1910 and 1950, which are not supported by the provided map of 1910 alone. The description of the 1910 map is somewhat accurate, but the assumptions about 1950 are unfounded without a corresponding map for that year. The writing also suffers from organizational issues and grammatical errors. To improve, focus on accurately describing the visual information provided, avoid making unsupported assumptions, and ensure clear and grammatically correct writing. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The transitions between describing Langley in 1910 and 1950 are abrupt, and the writing feels disjointed. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. The conclusion is simplistic and doesn't summarize the changes effectively. To improve, focus on using clear topic sentences for each paragraph, employing transition words to connect ideas, and ensuring the conclusion provides a concise overview of the key differences between the two periods.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and limited, with some inaccuracies. For example, using 'changed nature and structures' is vague. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary related to urban development and land use. Try to incorporate more specific terms to describe the types of buildings, facilities, and changes observed in the map. For instance, instead of 'small houses,' consider 'terraced housing' or 'cottages.' Instead of 'Building mansions instead of factory' try 'The factory was replaced by larger residential buildings'. Also, avoid informal language like 'have fun'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. For example, 'Langley, 1910 we can see Factory' is grammatically incorrect. The sentence 'The railway line was near houses, it is not good because the railway it can disturb people' contains multiple errors and lacks clarity. To improve, focus on using correct verb tenses consistently, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and constructing clear and concise sentences. Proofreading carefully for errors is essential.

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