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Band 7+: The maps below show the changes made to a farm in the 1980 to turn factory site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features two distinct layouts titled "1980" and "Now." In 1980, the layout consisted of a gate leading into an area with a pond surrounded by two benches and flower beds located on the bottom left corner, a rectangular section at the top right containing three trees, and another square section at the bottom right containing flower beds. Currently, the layout has shifted to include a pond with two benches and bushes nearby on the left section, a play area occupying the bottom right section, and a designated spot on the top right for leisure activities featuring three trees, chairs, decks, and a barbecue setup.

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The two maps illustrate the development that has taken place in the park from 1980 to the present days.

Overall, several new facilities were constructed, while existing facilities were removed. These changes have made the park more convenient for people.

The most noticeable change is the removal of the gates, which allowed the area to be expanded and new roads to be built. The road now consists of four routes that spread out in different directions. In the south-west, there was a large flower area in 1980, but it has been replaced by a playground. Another flower section has been substituted with a bush area.

The pond has remained unchanged. A new bench has been added, while the other benches have been moved slightly to the left. In the north-east, a picnic area with chairs, tables and a barbecue has been added among the trees.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The report effectively identifies the main transformations between the two maps and provides a clear overview of the changes. The comparison between the 1980 layout and the current layout is logical. To improve, ensure that the description of the features aligns more precisely with the visual data provided; for instance, there is some confusion regarding the location of the playground versus the flower beds based on the description. Additionally, refining the accuracy of the spatial descriptions (e.g., the specific movement of benches or the nature of the new roads) would strengthen the response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow. The progression from an overview to specific details is logical. Cohesive devices are used effectively to link ideas, such as 'Overall', 'The most noticeable change', and 'In the north-east'. To reach a higher band, you could use even more sophisticated transitional phrases to connect the changes between the two time periods more seamlessly.

Lexical Resource

You have used a good range of vocabulary to describe changes, such as 'constructed', 'removed', 'replaced', 'substituted', and 'remained unchanged'. The use of 'substituted' and 'expanded' shows good control. To improve, try to incorporate more varied synonyms for 'area' or 'section' to avoid repetition, and use more precise verbs for spatial changes (e.g., 'repurposed' or 'transformed'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good mix of simple and complex sentence structures. Most sentences are error-free and convey meaning clearly. However, there are minor issues with noun number and phrasing (e.g., 'present days' should be 'the present day' or 'present times'). Ensure consistent use of articles and pluralization to maintain a high level of accuracy throughout the response.

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