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Band 7+: The maps below show the changes that have occured in Grange Park from 1920 to today

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The image shows a rectangular layout with Arnold Avenue at the top and Eldon Street at the bottom, featuring entrances on both streets; rose gardens and seats flank the top left and bottom left corners, as well as a top right rose garden and pond for water plants; a central fountain is depicted; a stage for musicians is positioned on the left side; a glasshouse is located on the right side.

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The maps illustrate the transformation of Grange Park from 1920 to present day. Overall, there are several changes in the maps.

Grange Park was a rectangle shape bordered by Arnold Avenue (north) and Eldon Street (south) with two entrances. The Rose Garden was located in the upper-left corner, which remains unchanged nowadays. Another Rose Garden was relocated to the center of the park and was surrounded by four seating areas. In 1920, the stage for musicians was next to the left of the Rose Garden, but it had changed into the Amphitheatre today in the same location. Furthermore, the fountain was originally positioned in the center of the park, while it has turned into a Water feature and placed in the southeast corner.

Moreover, the glasshouse in 1920 was removed, which was replaced with a Water feature. There are some additional facilities that are currently in place, such as a children’s playground that is placed on the top right corner and Cafe is beside it. Additionally, there is an entrance for the underground car park next to the water feature.

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The report covers the main changes in the park layout, with a clear overall structure and appropriate use of comparative language. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the rose garden in the top-left is described as unchanged, but the visual description suggests changes; the relocation of the rose garden to the center is not supported; the fountain is said to have become a water feature in the southeast, but the visual description indicates a pond for water plants and a separate fountain; the glasshouse is replaced by a water feature, but the visual description mentions a pond for water plants, not a water feature; the children's playground and cafe are mentioned but not in the visual description. To improve, ensure all details align with the visual information and avoid adding unsupported features.

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The report is logically organized and easy to follow, with clear paragraphing. However, some transitions between ideas could be smoother, and the use of cohesive devices is somewhat repetitive. Consider using a wider range of linking words and phrases to improve flow.

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The vocabulary is adequate and generally appropriate, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'transformation', 'relocated', 'positioned'). However, there is room for more sophisticated and varied lexical choices. Avoid repetition of words like 'located' and 'placed'.

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The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences. There are minor errors (e.g., 'a rectangle shape' should be 'rectangular', 'had changed into' could be 'was changed to', 'it has turned into' could be 'it has been turned into'). Overall, the grammar is mostly accurate and does not impede understanding.

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