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Band 6+: The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Forton Valley City from 2000 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts two maps illustrating Forton Valley City in 2000 and 2010. Significant changes from 2000 to 2010 include: the City Hall replaced by a Public Library, and Forton University added on the east side. The park relocated to the south of the K.G. School, with a Toy Shop and a Playground nearby. The farmland and dairy farm in 2000 are transformed into residential buildings, Vercity Cafe to the south of the library, and more greenery spaces eastward. The shopping center remains unchanged.

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The given pictures illustrate how Forton Valley City changed between 2000 and 2010.

Overall, the city underwent a number of changes, the most important of which are the conversion of Dairy Farm, City Hall, K.G school and park, making city much more modern.

In the northwest of the city, the Shopping Center remained unchanged throughout this period, the Farmland under the shopping center was converted into a playground for people in 2010. K.G school and a small toy shop located in the right corner of the school were constructed , replacing the dairy farm which used to be next to the farmland.

The right-handed side witnessed a nymber of changes, with the City Hall deytroyed to build a public library. Beside the city hall in 2000 was the K.G school, after which it made space for Forton University. In the southeast, there used to be a park but it was then redeveloped into Versity cafe and a new car park was build next to old one.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and describes the main changes, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, it incorrectly states that the K.G. school and toy shop were constructed replacing the dairy farm, whereas the visual description indicates the park was relocated near the K.G. school, and the toy shop and playground were added nearby. It also misidentifies the 'Vercity Cafe' as 'Versity cafe' and mentions a new car park that is not in the description. The report omits the addition of residential buildings and greenery spaces. To improve, ensure all key changes are accurately reported and avoid introducing unsupported details. Organize the information more clearly, perhaps by grouping changes by area, and proofread for spelling errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall statement and a division into two main paragraphs describing changes in different areas. However, the flow is occasionally disrupted by unclear referencing (e.g., 'it made space for Forton University' could be ambiguous) and a slight lack of cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each pronoun clearly refers to its antecedent.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'underwent a number of changes', 'converted into', 'redeveloped into'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'nymber', 'deytroyed', 'Versity' instead of 'Vercity') and some awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the right-handed side', 'making city much more modern'). To improve, proofread for spelling and use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'demolished', 'relocated', and 'constructed'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are noticeable grammatical errors and punctuation issues. For example, 'K.G school and a small toy shop ... were constructed , replacing' has an unnecessary space before the comma, and 'a new car park was build' should be 'was built'. Also, some sentences are incomplete or awkwardly structured (e.g., 'after which it made space for Forton University'). To improve, review subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and sentence construction, and ensure punctuation is used correctly throughout.

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