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Band 6+: The maps below show the changes that have taken place in a town called Greenfield between 1990 and 2020.

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The image features two comparison map layouts titled GREENFIELD IN 1990 and GREENFIELD IN 2020, both with a north indicator arrow in the upper-right corner, a horizontal River across the northern section crossed by a bridge, and clusters of trees in the northwest, northeast, and south. In GREENFIELD IN 1990, the central rectangular road loop contains the Town Hall at its north and the Market Square in its center, flanked on the outer west by a Car Park and on the outer east by a Library, while south of the main horizontal road lies a School in the southwest and Farmland in the southeast. In GREENFIELD IN 2020, inside the central loop, the Town Hall remains while the Market Square is replaced by a Shopping Centre; on the perimeter, the Car Park to the west is expanded with marked bays and tree borders, the Library to the east is replaced by a Park featuring trees and a pond, the southwest School is replaced by a Community Centre, and the southeast Farmland is replaced by a Hospital with surrounding trees.

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The maps illustrates the changes that occurred in the town of Greenfield between 1990 and 2020.

Overall, the area underwent significant changes , with the car park being expanded and several facilities being added.

Looking first at the eastern part of the town, one of the main changes was contruction of the hospital instead of the farmland at the south-eastern corner of the town. There was a library in the eastern part of Greenfield, and then it has been replaced by the park. The new lake was contructed and some tress were planted in the park. North-eastern side of the area has remained unchanged since 1990.

In the western part of the town, the car park has been expanded which meant that many vehicles could parked there. Another modification was the school. It was converted to the community centre. The market square replaced by shopping centre in the middle of the town, while town hall was remained unchanged.

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main changes in Greenfield between 1990 and 2020. It provides a clear overview and covers key transformations, such as the expansion of the car park, the replacement of the library with a park, the conversion of the school to a community centre, and the change from farmland to a hospital. However, there are some omissions and minor inaccuracies: the report does not mention the addition of tree borders around the car park, and it incorrectly states that a lake was constructed in the park (the visual description mentions a pond). Additionally, there are minor grammatical and spelling errors (e.g., 'contruction', 'tress', 'parked' instead of 'be parked', and 'town hall was remained'). To improve, ensure all key details are included and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for the eastern and western parts. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing (e.g., 'it has been replaced' without a clear subject) and abrupt transitions. The overview could be more comprehensive, and the paragraphing could be more balanced. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'underwent significant changes', 'converted to'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'contruction', 'tress', 'contructed') and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'many vehicles could parked' should be 'many vehicles could be parked'). To improve, expand your range of synonyms and ensure correct spelling and collocations (e.g., 'construction of the hospital' instead of 'contruction of the hospital'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are noticeable grammar errors that affect clarity. For example, 'The maps illustrates' should be 'The maps illustrate', 'it has been replaced' should be 'it was replaced' for consistency, and 'town hall was remained' should be 'town hall remained'. Additionally, there are issues with passive voice and verb tense consistency. To improve, review subject-verb agreement, use of passive voice, and maintain consistent past tense throughout the report.

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