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Band 6+: The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Winsbury Village between 1850 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features two maps titled "Winsbury Village, 1850-1950", contrasting the village layout between "1850" and "1950". In the 1850 map, labeled features include "church" and "market square" at a central road junction, "Harwood House" to the east, "Spurlon Farm" to the northeast, and "River Arlon" running across the southern area, surrounded by wooded areas in the northwest, west, and south, along with a few scattered houses along the roads. In the 1950 map, labeled features include "Glassware factory" in the northwest, "Harwood Hotel" (occupying the former site of Harwood House), and "River Arlon" spanned by a bridge to the southeast. Additional developments in 1950 include an east-west railway line with a station near the central junction, new rows of residential houses replacing Spurlon Farm and line the roads to the south and northeast, while the church remains intact and the original trees and market square label are removed.

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The map illustrates the development that have taken place in Winsbury Village over the 100-year period between 1850 and 1950.

Overall, the village underwent considerable development, becoming more residental and industrial. The most significant changes were the construction of railway track and glassware factory, as well as a substantial increase in the houses. Moreover, Harwood house was converted in hotel, while much of woodland and farmland disappeared.

In 1850, Winsbury was rural village with large areas of woodland spread across different parts of area. Harwood house was located to the south of market square, with a church situated to its west. Spurlon farm occupied a large portion in northeast, while only a small number of houses were built. River arlon located at the south of the map with a small overhead bridge.

By 1950, village witnessed noticable changes. Harwood house converted into hotel. The most visible changes were the construction of glassware factory, which is situated to the west of the village. A railway track was also built, running from east to west , from the centre of the village. In addition, Spurlon farm was replaced with residental houses, whereas a number of houses were builton both sides of road. A new bridge was also constructed on the river apron, improving access between part of the village.

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village: 7

houses: 4

changes: 3

harwood: 3

house: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and describing key changes in Winsbury Village between 1850 and 1950. It covers the main developments such as the construction of the railway, factory, and new housing, as well as the conversion of Harwood House to a hotel. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as the incorrect location of Harwood House (it was east of the market square, not south) and the bridge in 1850 (which was not present until 1950). Additionally, the report omits the removal of the market square and the preservation of the church. To improve, ensure all key features are accurately described and make more precise comparisons between the two periods. Also, proofread for spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'residental' should be 'residential', 'builton' should be 'built on').

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs for each time period. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and minor lapses in cohesion. For example, the phrase 'as well as a substantial increase in the houses' is slightly unnatural, and the transition between paragraphs could be smoother. The use of 'Moreover' and 'In addition' helps, but some sentences are overly long or lack clear linking. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and use a wider range of cohesive devices (e.g., 'while', 'whereas', 'furthermore') to connect ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, including words like 'considerable development', 'substantial increase', and 'noticable changes'. However, there are some spelling errors (e.g., 'residental', 'noticable', 'builton') and occasional imprecise word choices (e.g., 'overhead bridge' instead of 'bridge', 'part of the village' instead of 'parts of the village'). The vocabulary is not always natural or sophisticated, and some terms are repeated (e.g., 'village', 'houses'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'residential', 'noticeable', 'constructed', 'converted into') and ensure correct spelling to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'the development that have taken place' should be 'the developments that have taken place', 'Harwood house was converted in hotel' should be 'Harwood House was converted into a hotel', and 'River arlon' should be 'River Arlon'. There are also missing articles (e.g., 'a rural village', 'the village') and punctuation issues (e.g., 'from east to west , from the centre'). To improve, pay attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and punctuation. Using a wider range of structures, such as passive voice and relative clauses, would also enhance grammatical range.

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