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Band 4+: The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington from 1980 to 2005.

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The image shows maps comparing the same area in 1980 and 2005. In 1980, the area includes a hospital, River Alanah, school, airport, woodland, houses, car parks, and a railway station; in 2005, a stadium, park, marina, warehouse, factories, and skyscrapers are added, whereas some houses and the woodland are removed.

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The map gives data on how Leura in Australia changed between 1980 and 2005. Overall, the area became more urbanised over the period, with several new facilities such as Stadium, marina, factories, park and skyscrapers, while some existing features were removed. The main changes were west side of layout.

In earlier year, there was woodland located in south west just near the parking but through the period there were factories. To the south west of railway station were constructed skyscrapers. Moreover, just under the school was build warehouse. Meanwhile, Airport and school stayed unchanged.

In addition to this in north side of railway constructed marina, while hospital stayed constant and near to hospital trees were replaced by park. As for house in north side of the map there replaced by the stadium and just under stadium and in north of the park was built car parking.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the changes between the two maps. However, there are significant issues with accuracy and coherence. First, the report introduces a new name for the town ('Leura in Australia') which was not provided in the task, creating a discrepancy. Second, while the report identifies some changes, the descriptions of locations are often confusing or inaccurate (e.g., the placement of skyscrapers and the marina). To improve, focus on using precise directional language (North, South, East, West) and ensure that the relationship between features is described clearly. Additionally, work on grammatical accuracy, particularly regarding verb tenses and articles, to ensure the description of past changes is clear. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is hindered by poor sentence structure and weak cohesive devices. While you attempt to use transition words like 'Moreover', 'Meanwhile', and 'In addition to this', they do not always connect the ideas smoothly. To improve, focus on using a variety of linking words to show relationships between changes (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Consequently', 'Following this') and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic. The transition between describing the west side and the north side could be more fluid.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and often used incorrectly. There are several instances where word choices are imprecise or awkward (e.g., 'In earlier year', 'just under the school was build warehouse'). You should aim to use more varied and precise vocabulary for describing changes in maps, such as 'transformed into', 'demolished', 'expanded', or 'modernized'. Additionally, ensure that nouns are used with appropriate articles (e.g., 'a stadium' instead of 'Stadium').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are issues with verb tenses (e.g., 'was build' instead of 'was built'), subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structures are often repetitive or fragmented. To improve, practice using a wider range of complex sentence structures, such as passive voice (which is essential for describing changes in maps) and relative clauses. Pay close attention to tense consistency, as you are describing completed changes in the past.

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