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Band 7+: The maps below show the changes to Hassleton-On-Sea from 1999 to 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image displays two maps for Hassleton-on-Sea: 1999 and 2016. For 1999: Hassleton Road, 3 houses, 1 car park, Hassleton Pier with 3 art galleries, a beach, 2 woodland areas, Harbour Street, a harbour with 3 docks (A, B, C), and a sea with 4 fishing boats. For 2016: New Hassleton Road, 1 Camera Store, 1 Clothes Store, 1 Sports Store, 2 car parks, The Grand Seaview Hotel, 1 Sailing Club, Cafe 57, Hassleton Pier with 3 art galleries and 1 dock, a beach with 3 beach huts and 5 smaller structures, 1 woodland area, a harbour, and a sea with 4 sailboats.

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The maps illustrate changes that occurred to Hassleton-On-Sea from 1999 to 2016.

Overall, Hassleton-On-Sea experienced massive reconstruction over the given period. Over 5 new buildings and beach facilities were constructed, and a large road change occurred in 2016. Harbour and Hassleton Pier remained relatively unchanged.

On the one hand, large changes happened inland. Houses located northwest were replaced by camera, clothes and sports stores. Moreover, docks situated east moved to Hassleton Pier, joining it, and were replaced with Cafe 57. Furthermore, Hassleton Road, crossing the city, and Harbour Street, located south, merged into New Hassleton Road. To the west of this road, The Grand Seaview Hotel with its car park was constructed; to the east, the Sailing Club replaced Woodland.

On the other hand, there were a few coastal refinements. A car park, located north of Hassleton-On-Sea, was enlarged. New stairs were constructed to connect the car park and the beach. The beach was expanded east, and beach huts were established west of it.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

beach: 4

hassleton: 4

hassleton-on-sea: 3

located: 3

replaced: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a very strong overview and covers the main transformations effectively. The comparison between the two periods is clear, and the grouping of information (inland vs. coastal) is logical. To improve, ensure that all specific details from the visual description are integrated where possible, such as the change in the number of boats or the specific reduction in woodland areas. The use of cohesive devices is good, though some transitions could be made even smoother to enhance the flow of the description.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized into an introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs that separate inland changes from coastal changes. This structure makes the information easy to follow. However, the use of cohesive devices like 'On the one hand' and 'On the other hand' is slightly misused here; these are typically used to present contrasting viewpoints or arguments rather than simply categorizing different geographical areas. To improve, consider using spatial transitions such as 'Regarding the inland area' or 'In terms of the coastal developments' to create a more natural flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate and effective for describing changes, using terms like 'reconstruction,' 'replaced,' 'merged,' and 'established.' There is a good attempt to use varied verbs to describe development. To reach a higher band, try to incorporate more sophisticated synonyms for 'change' or 'construction' and ensure that the collocations are more natural (e.g., instead of 'large road change occurred,' consider 'significant modifications were made to the road network').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of sentence structures, including complex sentences and passive voice, which is essential for describing maps. Most sentences are clear and convey the intended meaning. However, there are minor issues with article usage and phrasing that occasionally disrupt the smoothness of the reading. For example, 'replaced by camera, clothes and sports stores' would be more accurate as 'replaced by a camera store, a clothes store, and a sports store.' Paying closer attention to noun countability and article precision will help improve accuracy.

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