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Band 6+: The maps show the town of Harbourville in 1950 and 2020.

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The image shows two maps: "Harbourville 1950" and "Harbourville 2020." In 1950, the map includes: houses to the northwest, a forest to the west, fruit orchard south of the forest, a fish market to the south, Harbourville Road running from north to south, Murphy's Landing Marina north of the Harbourville Road curve, and West Shore Marina east of the Harbourville Road along the harbor. In 2020, the map features: houses to the northwest, a park west of the marina and east of the houses, located along Harbourville Road; a harbor history museum south of West Shore Marina opposite Murphy's Landing Marina, which no longer exists; the forest is replaced by expanded housing, the fruit orchard remains, and the fish market stays in the same location.

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The maps illustrate the changes that took place in Harbourville between 1950 and 2020.

Overall, the area underwent a number of significant changes, with the noticeable being the construction of a park and a history museum and the removal of the forest. Meanwhile, certain original features, such as the Harbour and the Harbourview Road remained largely unchanged.

In 1950, there was a forest in the western part of the area, with only a few houses on the nourth-west side and a fruit orchard in the south-west part. In addition, a fish market also be seen near Harbourview road in the western part near to the orchard. Moreover, the harbour was located the eastern side, as well as Murphy’s Landing Marina and West Shore Marina were situated in the western part of the harbour.

By 2020, several notable modifications had taken place. The most prominent change was the conversion of the forest into a park. Some new houses were built beside the park, and the fruit orchard side was reduced. The fish market was expended, as well as the Murphy’s Landing Marina was replaced by the Harbour History Museum. However, West Shore Marina, the harbour and Harbourview road remained unchanged in their original positions.

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marina: 4

forest: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall description of the changes, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, it states that the forest was converted into a park, whereas the visual description indicates the forest was replaced by expanded housing and a park was built elsewhere. It also incorrectly mentions the fruit orchard was reduced and the fish market was expanded, which are not supported by the description. Additionally, the report omits the fact that the park is located west of the marina and east of the houses, and it misnames 'Harbourville Road' as 'Harbourview Road.' To improve, ensure that all key features and changes are accurately described, and avoid introducing information not present in the visual. Focus on clearly presenting the main transformations and maintaining consistency with the given data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices is generally effective, but there are a few minor lapses, such as the phrase 'the noticeable being' which is awkward and slightly disrupts flow. Paragraphing is managed well, and the progression of ideas is easy to follow. To improve, ensure that cohesive devices are used more naturally and that each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with appropriate use of terms like 'conversion', 'modifications', and 'replaced'. There are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'the noticeable being' and 'the fruit orchard side was reduced', which could be expressed more precisely. Additionally, 'expended' is a spelling error for 'expanded'. To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural word choices, and ensure that all vocabulary is used accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'a fish market also be seen' should be 'a fish market could also be seen', and 'the harbour was located the eastern side' is missing a preposition ('on the eastern side'). Additionally, 'the fruit orchard side was reduced' is awkward, and 'the Murphy's Landing Marina was replaced' has an unnecessary article. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of prepositions, and ensuring that all sentences are grammatically complete and accurate.

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