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Band 4+: THE PARENTS OF YOUR AUSTRALIAN FRIEND CHRIS HAVE INVITED YOU TO A SURPRISE BIRTHDAY PARTY FOR HIM/HER WRITE A LEETER TO CHRIS PARENTS. IN YOUR LETTER.

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Dear Mrs. Collins,

I hope you are well both of you. I am writing to chrisms parents because they celebrate my friend surprise birthday party.

Yes, I think Chris will very happy because he is feeling good. His birthday celebration some different types of give party because he is coming from India sometime so, he will enjoy this party.

I do not able to party because my father was heart attack in two days. I am going to Delhi and he is not well and doctor says my father have a done angioplasty. So, I have here in ten days. Then I will come home together my father.

Let you know about I am meet Chris after sometime and when my father is well then I will meet you and together with travelling outside. I have many planed but his time I am not able to meet you as well as I will meet you seen Chris.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in conveying the reason for absence. More specific information would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear transitions between ideas. Improving sentence structure and adding cohesive devices would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall lexical resource.

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Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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