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Band 4+: The percentage of internet users who shopped online in Australia by age group 2007-2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows internet users who shopped online in Australia by age group for the years 2007 and 2009, with data as follows: Age group 15-25: 2007 at 20%, 2009 at 30%; Age group 26-35: 2007 at 30%, 2009 at 40%; Age group 36-45: 2007 at 35%, 2009 at 45%; Age group 46-55: 2007 at 25%, 2009 at 40%; Age group 56-65: 2007 at 15%, 2009 at 20%; Age group 65+: 2007 at 5%, 2009 at 10%.

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The bar chart demonstrates the social media users who shopped online in Australia by age from 15 to 65 in 2007 and 2009

Overall, the superior age was 36-45 ,although 65+ age was the lowest in this period .And three items was responsible for average percentages.

The 36-45 age people who bought online was in the peak place almost 40% in 2009, however the age accounted for 25% in 2009.the Lowest percentages who shopped from online seen in the 65+ age ,and stood at 5% and 11% in 2009 and 2007 respectively.

The 15-25 and 46-55 ages was similar each others in 2007 and accounted for almost 20% ,however in 2009 year the 46-55 age was dominant then 15-25 age by almost 30% .While in 2007 and 2009 people shopped similar percentages almost 35% simultaneously .

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the data but contains inaccuracies and lacks clear organization. The overview is weak, and the body paragraphs are not well-developed. The language used is not always accurate or precise, and there are issues with grammar and vocabulary. To improve, focus on providing a clear and accurate overview, organizing the information logically, and using more precise language to describe the data. Also, ensure that the grammar and vocabulary are accurate and appropriate for academic writing. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main points. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate different aspects of the data. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences. Consider grouping age groups with similar trends together to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of inappropriate word choice (e.g., 'superior age,' 'peak place'). Expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends. Use more precise language to convey the information accurately. For example, instead of 'almost 40%,' use 'approximately 40%.' Avoid informal language. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. For example, 'The 36-45 age people who bought online was in the peak place almost 40% in 2009' should be revised to 'The 36-45 age group had the highest percentage of online shoppers in 2009, at approximately 40%.'

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