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Band 5+: The pie chart below show the percentage distribution of the houshold expenditure in a country in 2010 and 2020.

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The image contains two pie charts detailing the percentage distribution of household expenditure in a country for 2010 and 2020. For 2010, the percentages were: Housing 24%, Food 18%, Transport 14%, Healthcare 8%, Education 10%, Entertainment 7%, Clothing 6%, and Others 13%. For 2020, the figures were: Housing 22%, Food 16%, Transport 17%, Healthcare 9%, Education 12%, Entertainment 8%, Clothing 5%, and Others 11%.

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The pie charts compare total number of households, which divided in the value of percentage in a particular country during 2010 and 2020.

Overall, in both of the years, a very less variation noticed in all household expenditure such as housing, food, clothing and others slightly decreased after a decade whereas transport, healthcare, education and entertainment moderately higher than 2010.

In 2010, 24% expenditure noticed in housing from the total, which covered big proportion from the others. Figures in food, transport, education and other sectors have marginal difference in which, food at 18%, transport at 14%, education at 10% and others with 13%. The proportion of healthcare, entertainment and clothing had variation of 1%, 8%, 7% and 6% respectively.

In 2020, the higher proportion of households was in housing compare to any other distributed factors, around 22%. The least section is clothing from all the others, at 5%. Food and transport, health care and entertainment as well as education and other categories had variation of only 1%.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by comparing the two pie charts and highlighting overall trends. However, there are some inaccuracies and unclear expressions. For instance, the phrase 'total number of households, which divided in the value of percentage' is awkward, and the data for healthcare and entertainment in 2010 is incorrectly stated as '8%, 7%' instead of '8% and 7%' (though the numbers are correct, the phrasing is confusing). Additionally, the report omits specific percentages for some categories in 2020 (e.g., food, education, others) and makes a vague statement about 'variation of only 1%' without specifying which categories. To improve, ensure all key data points are clearly presented and avoid ambiguous phrasing. Focus on accurate and concise descriptions of the main features and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is often disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. The overview is present but could be more precise and better integrated. Cohesive devices are used sparingly and sometimes inaccurately (e.g., 'which divided in the value of percentage'). Paragraphing is attempted but the second paragraph mixes data from both years, making it harder to follow. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea, use a range of linking words accurately, and refine sentences for smoother transitions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but limited in range and precision. There are some attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'expenditure noticed', 'covered big proportion'), but these are often awkward or inaccurate. More precise and varied vocabulary is needed, such as 'accounted for', 'constituted', 'experienced a rise', 'remained relatively stable'. Avoid informal or vague terms like 'very less variation' and 'moderately higher'. To improve, use a wider range of topic-specific vocabulary and ensure word choices are natural and accurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that impede clarity. There are problems with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'which divided'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'expenditure noticed'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are often repetitive and lack complexity. For example, 'The proportion of healthcare, entertainment and clothing had variation of 1%, 8%, 7% and 6% respectively' is confusing and grammatically incorrect. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for punctuation and article usage.

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