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Band 6+: The pie chart below shows the percentage of students who graduated from different faculties in a Canadian university, in 2020.

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The image displays a pie chart titled 'Students Graduation Rates by Faculty in a Canadian University (2020)', which shows the following distribution: Arts, 25%; Science, 20%; Business, 15%; Engineering, 10%; Education, 10%; Other, 10%; Medicine, 5%; and Law, 5%.

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The pie chart demonstartes the information about the students from the different Canadian faculties who graduated in 2020.

Overall, it is apparent that rates of Arts, Business, and Science were by far more higher, although the Arts accounted for the highest rate. Meanwhile, Engineering and Education shared the same proportion. Simirally, Law and Medicine did the same.

Firstly, Arts and Science’s student graduated more frequent than anyone else, 1 out of 4 and 1 out of 5 students respectively. While, Business’s graduaters were less common who made up 15%. As a result, three of them had the highest likelyhood to graduate and submitted for more than a half(60%).

In stark contrast, only one out of ten were able to graduate in the faculties, labelled as Education and Engineering. As well as Medicine and Law whose frequency was 1 out of 20. Notably, Other faculties summed up tantamountly to Education and Engineering.

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The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the data. It provides an overview and highlights key features such as the highest proportion for Arts and the equal shares for some faculties. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'demonstartes', 'more higher', 'Simirally', 'graduaters', 'likelyhood', 'submitted for more than a half'). The data is mostly correct, but the statement 'Other faculties summed up tantamountly to Education and Engineering' is unclear and slightly inaccurate. To improve, ensure accurate spelling and grammar, and clarify comparisons. Overall, the response covers the requirements with minor lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. For example, 'Arts and Science's student graduated more frequent than anyone else' is confusing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'While' used incorrectly). Paragraphing is present but could be more logically organized to separate key trends. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not always precise or varied. There are some errors in word choice and spelling (e.g., 'demonstartes', 'Simirally', 'likelyhood', 'tantamountly'). The report uses some good phrases like 'in stark contrast' and 'accounted for', but overall the range is limited. To improve, use more specific and accurate vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'proportion', 'percentage', 'accounted for', 'comprised') and avoid informal or incorrect terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include: 'demonstartes' (spelling), 'more higher' (double comparative), 'graduated more frequent' (should be 'more frequently'), 'who made up 15%' (incorrect relative clause), 'submitted for more than a half' (incorrect verb choice), and 'summed up tantamountly' (incorrect phrasing). The report attempts a range of structures but lacks control. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of comparatives, and accurate sentence construction. Proofreading for spelling and punctuation is also essential.

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