Pie Chart

Band 5+: The pie chart shows the number of people who were using different languages online. The table shows the average number of people online each year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image features a pie chart and a table; the pie chart represents online language populations totaling 529 million as of December 2001: English 43%, Non-English languages comprise: Japanese 9.8%, Chinese 8.8%, German 6.6%, Spanish 6.4%, Korean 4.6%, Italian 3.8%, French 3.3%, Portuguese 2.6%, Dutch 2.1%, and Other languages 9.5%. The table displays online user numbers and percentages of world population across five specific points: August 2001 with 513 million and 8.4%, August 2000 with 368 million and 6.1%, August 1999 with 195 million and 4.6%, September 1998 with 147 million and 3.6%, and November 1997 with 76 million and 1.8%.

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the piechart illustrates the percentages of specific language users worldwide in 2001 whereas the table describes the amount of individuals who were active online from 1997 to 2001 Overall,english users were found abundantly whereas other langauges were less commonly used,however a surge is seen in the online activity with the passage of time

it is clear from the pie chart that english was the most spoken language with 43% speakers whereas languages such as japanese,chinese,german,spanish and korean made less than 10% utilization on the other hand some unknown languages made upto 20 to 30% usage leaving italian,french,portuguese and dutch with least users of less than 5%

in contrast, table explicitly shows the increase in quantity of socially active persons, in 1997 only 1.8% of people were online, in the following years,this percentage increased slightly to 3.6 and 4.6 respectively,however a drastic elevation occured in the year 2000 where approximately 60% of world population became socially active but in the next year it dropped to 8.6 %

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Task Response

The report covers the main requirements of the task, summarizing the key features of both the pie chart and the table. There are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., 'some unknown languages made upto 20 to 30% usage' and the percentages in the last sentence). To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and avoid exaggerations. Also, pay attention to the overall structure and flow of the report to enhance coherence.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information from both the pie chart and the table, but the flow of ideas is not always smooth. The 'overall' statement is generic and doesn't effectively summarize the key trends. Transitions between paragraphs could be improved to create a more cohesive narrative. For example, explicitly linking the increase in online users to the language distribution could strengthen the analysis. The paragraphing is acceptable, but the connection between the pie chart and table descriptions needs to be clearer.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. While the report conveys the general information, there's limited use of more sophisticated language to describe trends and comparisons. For instance, instead of 'were found abundantly,' consider using phrases like 'constituted the majority' or 'represented the largest proportion.' Similarly, 'surge' and 'drastic elevation' are acceptable but could be replaced with more nuanced terms like 'significant increase' or 'substantial growth.' Expanding the range of vocabulary would enhance the report's clarity and impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and inaccuracies that affect clarity. For example, 'english users were found abundantly whereas other langauges were less commonly used' has issues with word order and verb usage. 'some unknown languages made upto 20 to 30% usage' is vague and grammatically awkward; it should be revised for clarity and accuracy. The statement about the year 2000 is inaccurate according to the provided data. Correcting these errors and ensuring accurate data representation is crucial for improving the report's credibility.

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