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Band 4+: The pie chart shows the online shopping Sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013.

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The image shows two upside-down pie charts. The left chart shows Online Sales for 2006, with 35% from Phones/PDAs, 15% from Accessories and 50% from Services. The right chart shows Online Sales for 2007, with 30% from Phones/PDAs, 20% from Accessories and 50% from Services.

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The pie chart below demonstrated the online shopping Sales for retail sector in new zealand 2003 and 2013.

Overall, According to the chart in 2003 travel makes up of a very large proportation (36 %), however in 2013 it declined dramatically to( 29%).

In 2003 A fifth of online sales is clothes however in 2013 the online sales of clothes decensed dramatically to( 16%) , Furthermore to In 2003 People purches just under (20%) in book, in desipet in 2013 increased substanially to 22% . The online sales of travel was slighty above 35% in 2003 and films /music accounts for 21 % of the online sales. In 2013 A fifth of online sales is travel and it makes up slightly below 30 % , addationally thirty three percent of online sales was film/music.

Conclusion:- in 2003 a large majorty people purches alot in travele however in Purchas more in 2013 the people purches more in film/music (33%).

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