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Band 4+: The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in Germany in 1980 and 2010.

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The image exhibits two pie charts labeled "Electricity Generation by Source in Germany" with data for the years 1980 and 2010; 1980 chart indicates a total of 107 units distributed as follows: 28 units coal, 28 units oil, 22 units gas, 20 units nuclear, 7 units hydro, 2 units other; 2010 chart shows a total of 214 units divided as: 155 units coal, 28 units oil, 27 units gas, 2 units nuclear, 2 units other.

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The given pie chart illlustrates electricity generation between New Zealand and Germany from 1980 to 2010.

Overall, electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany shows significiant increases and decreases between 1980 to 2010. Its clearly seen that coal shows biggest part for all years.

It is clearly seen from the pie which illustrates Germany chart the coal has big precentage than others for all years. The chart has 127 units in 1980. So it boosted to 200 units. The coal also improved apporxnamenly 3 times. While petroleum shows lowest degree for all yerars of the process. From 1980 to 2010 the hydro improved about 16 degree. However Natural gas declined 28 units in 30 years.

The electricity generation by source in New Zealand illustrates sinificiant increase about 2 times(107 units). The Nuvlear used to have 20 percentage before, however it become much more bigger in 2010. That part increased 10 units in 30 years. The natural gas and coal has same degree in 1980. Natural gas lose 26 units, while coal shows same degree between 1980 to 2010. The hydro lose 5 units, while Potrelium increased 5 units.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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shows: 4

degree: 4

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electricity: 3

generation: 3

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zealand: 3

germany: 3

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natural: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misunderstandings of the data presented in the pie charts. The description mixes data from both countries and misinterprets the changes over time. The writing also suffers from issues with clarity and grammar. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data for each country separately, using clear and precise language, and ensuring correct grammar and sentence structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information jumps between New Zealand and Germany without clear transitions, making it difficult to follow the comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate ideas. To improve, focus on organizing the information by country or by source, and use clear transition words to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the data. To enhance the lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to electricity generation and changes over time. For example, use synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease,' and be more specific with numerical descriptions. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors significantly impact the clarity of the message. Focus on improving basic grammar skills and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting the report.

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