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Band 6+: The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two pie charts comparing the percentages of expenditure on travel, film/music, books, and clothes in 2003 and 2013. In 2003, travel accounted for the highest percentage at 36%, followed by clothes at 24%, film/music at 21%, and books at 19%. In 2013, travel still had the highest percentage at 33%, followed by film/music at 29%, clothes at 22%, and books at 16%.
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The pie·charts·show the comparison of the online sales·data for retail sectors in New Zealand between 2003 and 2013.←

The allocation of the proportion of the online sales changed lot from 2003 to 2013. The biggest stake of the online sales in 2003 came from travel sector, while the smallest stake of the online sales in 2003 came from books. But in 2013, film/music replaced travel to be the sector which dominates the biggest stake of the online sales, while clothes replaced books to be the sector which held the smallest stake of the online sales.

Besides, as showed in the pie·charts, on one hand, the proportion of the online sales for travel decreased dramatically from 36% to 29%, meanwhile the proportion of the online sales for clothes decreased dramatically from 24% to 16%, on the other hand, the proportion of the online sales for film/music increased dramatically from 21% to 33%. However, the difference of the proportion of the online sales for books between in 2003 and 2013 is not remarkable, which was only a slight addition of 3%.

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Overall Band Score

6
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
online: 10
sales: 8
proportion: 5
stake: 4
travel: 3
sector: 3
books: 3
which: 3
dramatically: 3
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Task Response

7
The report addresses the task by comparing the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data presented, such as mentioning 'online sales data' instead of 'expenditure' and inaccurately stating that film/music dominated the sales in 2013.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5
The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear structure and logical progression of ideas. However, there are some instances of repetition and awkward phrasing that affect the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

5.5
The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary and attempts to use a variety of expressions. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward word choices that impact the precision of the language used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5
There is a variety of sentence structures used throughout the report, showcasing some complexity. However, there are errors in punctuation, verb tense consistency, and sentence construction that hinder overall accuracy.

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