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Band 4+: The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Australia in 2010 and 2015.

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The image shows two pie charts comparing the percentages of various categories for the years 2015 and 2010. In 2015: Electric & Appliance 33%, Food & Beverage 22%, Home Furnishings 19%, Video Games 8%, Gift Items 11%, Books 7%. In 2010: Electric & Appliance 27%, Food & Beverage 21%, Home Furnishings 22%, Video Games 19%, Gift Items 7%, Books 4%.
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The pie charts illustrate selling online purchases for retail chains in 2010 and 2015 in Australia.

Overall,it is clear that in both year (in 2010 and 2015),the majority of sales by Gift Items.And also books was took over small segment for two year(two charts).

In 2010,the largest segment was with 27% of the Electric & Appliance from other things.Second highest segment was Home Furnishings with 22%.The Food & Beverage was smallest 1% than Home Furnishings with 21%. Then Video Games was occupied in just under a fifth.The next segment is Gift items,it was took over only 7% of the whole proportion of the year.A small percentage is attributed to Books with 4% (under one in twenty).

Looking at the next pie chart ,in 2015 Electric & Appliance and Home Furnishings were again dominated with 33% and 22%.The Home Furnishings was slightly decreased from 2010 year,it was occupied with 19%.The next sector is Gift Items was took over with 11% selling.The smallest portion was Books 7%.

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
segment: 4
furnishings: 4
books: 3
&: 3
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Task Response

5.5
The report provides a good overview of the data, but some key details are missing. For example, the report does not mention the significant increase in sales of Electric & Appliances and the decrease in sales of Video Games between 2010 and 2015.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5
The report is generally coherent, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of parentheses is also inconsistent and distracting.

Lexical Resource

5
The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or in an unnatural way. The report could benefit from more precise and sophisticated language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The report contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The student needs to improve their understanding of basic grammar rules.

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